Recently, I read everyone's book reviews and paragraph reviews, thought deeply, and then came up with the following conclusions.

1: Optimize the plots of Qiao Luo and Wei Ya, reduce the appearance of Qiao Luo (has been changed, will modify the previous chapter)

2: Gradually reduce the emotional scene, not the harem, there may be a heroine later, but it will be accepted by most readers.

3: Expanded the internal development plot of the game.

4: Ask for a ticket

5: I hope you will give more opinions and write a work you like