The God of War is over, and finally the chapter is famous. Have you been scared?
This main line I started is the battle between the protagonist and the abyss force, but the introduction is a bit late. Considering the main line of the god war, it will be too monotonous, so I am integrated into some branch lines in the main line, such as Sophia, such as the frost, such as the Mingdel, of course, some copies are for the future. ... ...
It is worth mentioning that a copy of the frost wizard is an attempt to be made by the experience before I combined. This relatively separate small chapter is almost entirely written in a player's perspective. I want to see how this way of reading is, as a result, it seems still not bad, although the reader is a bit embarrassing, but it seems to have lied a lot of tears.
This also gave me some Xu Xin, because the theme and writing method of this book are very special, and it is completely different from other nets, and the perspective changes, let me not determine my own level. If the story of the frost elf can be written, then it will explain that after the new book will be opened, I should not write this multi-visa scene, I should also drive.
Of course, there are also many flaws, such as being in a burst, causing a lot of water, rhythm, and partially describing lyrical excessive.
Overall, the planned progress of this volume is reached.
However, there are also many unsatisfactory places.
One is the rhythm, I feel that I will slowly put the pad, but the climax is still pulling, and it is necessary to continue to ponder, continue to work hard.
One is a repetition of plots and words, this is a big problem, the former, I think it is my ideology and the idea is not going further, and the latter is simply accumulated. In order to solve these two problems, I think I should look at something more, charge the electricity.
Another is that the characters are too weak, templated, face, and some even have no face, especially the protagonist, like a toolman, I think this is the most scholar place.
Overall, the more deeper, the more you find your own shortcomings, too much too much, sometimes think about these shortcomings, I feel that everyone can continue to look at it is really a miracle ...
Unfortunately, this book has been constitutive, and the whole book is complete and reflect.
There should be two volumes, according to the current rhythm ... The number of words may be a lot, specifically, I have written the progress, although my main line and the end have long thought, but in the process, the metaphum of each volume It is to write while thinking about it, so I can't say good.
The secret of the origin of the world, the conflict between the protagonist and the gods will be expanded in the next volume.
I will try to tell you this story, try to depict a magnificent fantasy world, I hope everyone can continue to support.
In addition, there is double monthly ticket activity next month. I hope everyone can put a lot of money next month. I will continue, and the new volume will definitely be Wen Si Shu.
I didn't make a replenishment in the past few days were relatively busy, one is to think about the story of the next volume, a little card.
No way, and many tentacles strange, I am also too handsome. Everyone can read it in five minutes, I want to write three or four hours.
The above is a summary of the roll.
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