Game of the World Tree

I can't help but I have a statement first.

I wrote two years, "the game of the world tree" finally, honestly said, it is still a bit reluctant.

Two years of time, there are many things happening in reality. During this book, I graduated, I was working, and I was also ruined.

I always feel that life is constantly moving forward.

As for this release of this book ... Chinese rule, I still didn't get out of the influence of the old book, wrote open.

Regarding the truth of the world, this is also a good ending before I open, but when I have hesitated, whether I have changed the ending, after all, the idea is the idea, the inspiration and thinking of the truth is changing, At that time, I always think that in the fantasy, the final science is not very good.

However, the result is that he still didn't hold back.

However, seriously, now I still feel that the ending is not very good, I can't reach the most wanted results, the reason, um ... I slowly said.

Let's talk about the results, this book is currently 1.1W, ten times the first book is ended, and it is still slowly rising, I am only three years of writing career, it is already An extremely surpriseable result.

"World Tree" can have this grade, inseparable from everyone's support, as a random female main article (?), It is already very difficult.

I am really very grateful!

Ok, thank you for your end.

Here, starting the spray.

"World Tree" although the achievements are good, the story of 3 million words also makes me see a lot of problems.

First, rhythm disorders.

The book is the most serious thing, than the rhythm of a problem, especially in the main line and paved the way for each piece of the story ending.

The main line of "World Tree" is too dragged. When it is ambolical, it is too far away. After buried, there is no level promotion, and it is constantly improving the sense of readers, but a dumb mug of the mutter in the clouds in the clouds. A quiteer of readers lose interest in the main line.

For this matter, the problem is particularly serious, so that the whole book is somewhat cut.

This is a very deadly problem. If the book is not a player, it is estimated that the light is this, it is enough to flutter.

At the same time, there is also a problem of different levels of tiger head snakes in each plot, resulting in obviously high * tide, but it is not enough to write.

I reflect on the causes of these problems, there are three main:

One is insufficient writing experience, no planning in advance;

One is when it is created, I haven't made a detailed time. I have written too much time. When the details are written too little, sometimes I will also irrigate ...

The last one, it is that I personally beat, it is easy to show the tissue tail.

Of course, when it comes to the ending, there is also a repetition of my creation, and the middle is changed, and finally it is folded.

These disadvantages must be corrected. For me, the most effective way should be the content distribution and cool point setting of the plot in advance, and we must adhere to the initial heart, continue to create, continue to exercise, constantly think, accumulate experience.

Second, the characters are portrayed.

The characters of this book portrayed, in my opinion, it is quite failed.

Especially the protagonist, the protagonist does not have its own distinctive personality. If you go to the player element, the main character is quite weak, and there is no standing from beginning to end.

It can be said that if it is not a player, this book is almost no attractive.

In fact, it is not only the protagonist, the characters of the book are engraved, not clear enough, template, many conversations and practices do not meet role identity, and so on.

These problems, I also mentioned in the last test of the previous roll.

After reflection, I think the biggest reason is that I didn't make a good character in advance, and the foundation didn't have a good job. Although I had a main line, I didn't think about how to write, I have no deep thinking, no Can let the character live.

This is what I will try to avoid the next book.

The characters are portrayed, not to write the cumbersome detailed, but need to let the other party live through the appropriate language, action, appearance of the appearance and the character.

Sometimes, as long as the design is subtle, one or two sentences are enough to let people get together, so that everyone is impressed.

This is also the realm I have to pursue next.

Third, the plot is cut

The main line of this book and the player's plot is too cut, further dragging the rhythm.

This is a problem with the composition of the composition, and the problem of the moment of concept book. For this book, it has not been solved, but the new book should be avoided.

The lesson is that in the future, regardless of the main line or the branch, all the plots must be able to fuse together in a variety of ways, crosslink each other, stringed a tight line.

Fourth, literary works

Too many repetitions, too many words rereading, sometimes describing too pale weakness.

The battle is written in the sky, and the big scene is also a thousand articles. There is no self-featured, and it has not been able to write a wonderful.

The reason is too few accumulated, this problem can only be improved through a lot of reading, and consciously imitate learning, and continues to create.

5, I want to write anything.

This is the most probabilistic problem of writing a newbie, although I also wrote two, but there is still this problem.

Creating a story, do not need anything to explain, do not need to put all the things all, but it is necessary to draw silk and peel, layers deep, and continue to advance.

Sometimes, you should do a good fantasy, leave the reader to leave the space of imagination.

At the same time, when it is created in the future, it is necessary to avoid irrigation.

The above is the most serious problem of this book, and there are still some small problems, but they are not serious.

When creating a book, these mistakes should be avoided as much as possible.

Regarding the new book, I have no specific ideas, there have been some ideas, but I have not settled. At present, I have a little interest in the theme of the witch, but considering the lower limit and upper limit of the results, some hesitate ... I am even confused, but also Should not continue the female main article.

I want to know some ideas, everyone can leave a message in this chapter, I will see every one.

After all, create this matter, in addition to my favorite, I have to write a story of everyone.

Next, I need to think carefully for one to two months, and ultimately determine the subject and planning of the new book.

However, before opening a new book, let me write the "World Tree"!

Please don't remove the bookshelf first, there are still a few people, and it will come out these days.

As a text, it should still be worth seeing. (laugh)

Dear book friends, thank you for your two years.

When the new book is new, we look forward to seeing again.

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