I am a master of light novels in Japan

"Wait a minute, why did you come in my house?!" Li Yan asked with a blue face.

Gabriel, this girl with the identity of the Fallen Angel still wears that scarlet sportswear top, no skirt, and the length just covers the hips, but there is still a looming spring temptation when sitting cross-legged. Gabriel's legs almost have the perfect girly beauty.

She turned her head and looked at Li Yan with dull eyes after a night of cultivating immortals, and said: "Of course...I came in from the door."

"This is not nonsense... Uh, it does make sense. Angels seem to be able to fly, and it is also possible to come in from the balcony." Li Yan suddenly recovered. Recently, he can't use ordinary people's thinking to consider the situation.

Li Yan stretched out his hand to stop Gabriel’s topic guidance, and asked quite concerned: "Wait a minute, even if you come in from the door, how come you have my house key?"

Gabriel faced the computer and continued, "Didn't you lose your key and card in the fight last night?"

Of course he remembers this, but the key has been taken back 100%.

"So after I printed directly with plasticine by the way, can I just copy one?"

"what?!"

Li Yan looked at Gabriel in horror. He always felt that he had seen this scene in the series Prison Break.Do angels now learn these skills?

This is simply an illegal invasion. As a master of light novels, Li Yan, of course, would not consider calling the police. Who would believe such a situation...

When Li Yan was thinking, he saw Gabriel facing him, stretched out his hand and grabbed his butt.

"Hey, don't the pretty girl do such awkward things in my room?!" Li Yan's eyes widened in shock, and he shouted in his heart.

Li Yan immediately realized that he was still wearing a tank top and shorts, so he had to go back to his room, changed his clothes, and came out again to try to get rid of this trouble.When he walked behind Gabriel, Li Yan officially saw that Gabriel was playing an online game with his high-end Lenovo computer.

"Could it be... you invaded my room just to play the game?" Li Yan understood, and asked.

"It's so smart, otherwise who would be interested in your room? The internet in my room is cut off, otherwise I won't come here." Gabriel didn't even look at Li Yan, and nervously tapped on the computer.

Li Yan also had a hobby of playing games in the previous world, such as LOL, Overwatch, and the stand-alone Black Soul. The wizards have played all of them. He quietly touched behind Gabriel and saw this one she played. After the game, with a disdainful expression, a professional player's expression said: "What kind of broken game is this, I always feel that the plot is naive, and the playability is not very high."

"Huh?" Jia Baili was taken aback, looking at Li Yan with a complicated expression.

"What's the matter?" Li Yan asked when he realized that Jia Baili had turned his head.

Gabriel showed no expression and continued to play the game, chattering: "It's okay. This game is called "Super Academy War". I agree with you very much. The plot is boring, the playability is not high, and..."

"The guy who wrote the script used to update so fast, but now it has been delayed for a week. He was still addicted to fighting last night. Do you think I was right? Uesugi-sensei."

Li Yan stared at the little angel of 1.4 meters, remembering that his manuscript seemed to be on the table, and the other party saw it carefully. He realized that he seemed to underestimate the danger of this intruder. ...

...

"Let's talk, what do you want, hand-made, or my signature?" Li Yan sat on the seat, took a sip of the tea he had made yesterday, and asked calmly on the broken chair like a gentleman.

Gabriel poured a glass of Coke from his refrigerator and asked, "Why do you ask?"

"Don't think I haven't collected your information, Miss Gabriel." Li Yan looked at her coldly, and said: "You are the first person who abused me on my blog. The ID name is College Super Readers who can be queen, right? As long as my identity is announced, a bunch of readers will ambush at my door and push me into the toilet. I still know the risk of this."

"The second half is correct, but the front is not correct." Gabriel said in a quiet mode.

"What's wrong?" Li Yan asked curiously.

Gabriel sat opposite him and said blankly: "My ID is not a queen, you are mistaken."

Li Yan was taken aback, and then asked: "...really."

"My ID is Mengmeng Brother Gui, do you have any impression?" Gabriel asked after drinking a Coke.

"What an amazing ID..." Li Yan narrowed his eyes and thought.

But I did have an impression when I said that, I don't remember much. Li Yan remembered it for a long time, and asked: "I have an impression, that...do you leave a message for me?"

"Yes." Gabriel looked at Li Yan and said, "I sent a threatening letter to your company last month..."

Li Yan stood up abruptly and asked excitedly: "It's you guy who sent a letter to threaten me and threatened to kidnap me and put me under house arrest?!"

The people at Sanhe Company originally thought it was a threatening letter written by a brother-in-law engaged in the foundation.

Everything came to the ground, and as a result, this guy was even worse in nature than a squirrel. He was simply a devil. What kind of angel is it!

Gabriel didn't wait for Li Yan to go crazy, and then said: "I have read all the fourth volume you wrote, and I think it is very interesting. However, I always feel that there is still room for improvement."

"Don't break the subject, you girl, your personality is really inferior. At any rate, you still seem to be a good student... Wait a minute, do you think there is room for improvement?" Li Yan was startled and asked in surprise.

"Well, for example, in the latest chapter, you wrote that the superpowers of the protagonist group are far from being able to compete with the student council president of Toyama Ability Academy selected in the semifinals. Ningning Aragaki, the weakest member of the group Inspired by his metal ability, the opponent’s strongest attack is to defeat the opponent’s only weapon, and then make plans and arrangements. It should be this story."

Gabriel exhaled and said, "I feel that if you rewrite it directly, there is no way at all. As a result, the protagonist is struggling to support during the battle. Later I found that this method is more reasonable, at least the plot will make the battle more Hot blood, there is a strong turning point in the middle."

"It makes sense!" Li Yan thought in surprise.

Although considering that the protagonist is a rationalist, facing an almighty opponent, it may not necessarily win the opponent rationally. Then, the hot-blooded novel should grasp the randomly changing battle rules and write it in a series of calm plot The part of a climax.

"..." Li Yan returned to the computer and rewritten the latest chapter.

Gabriel looked at him quietly, and once again set his eyes on the bandage on his head.

That man with a completely different style when fighting...

Now watching him put his whole body into the writing of the novel, Jia Baili realized that this is the master...

"Edit the system, turn it on!" After Li Yan finished writing, he activated the system ability in his consciousness again.

under review……

[Work: "Super Academy War"

Evaluation: A++

Suggestion: Very good story arrangement, many people will like this battle plot and look forward to making persistent efforts]

Although the editing system is unique, the ability of the system is not omnipotent. The editor makes suggestions on the inconsistency with the market, but does not interfere too much with the plot.After all, he still needs to think about the plot on his own. It is gratifying to reach the level of A, but as if he is on this mountain and does not know the road like Lushan, he still needs a reliable adviser.

"Gabriel, thank you for your help..."

Li Yancan laughed, and said to Gabriel excitedly.But when he looked up, he saw that his room was already empty.

The young girl came here silently, and left silently.

Chapter 6 Car Accident Scene

On Saturday, although it is around nine o'clock, the residential areas in Tokyo have been sparsely pedestrian during this period. Most of the office workers either stay at home on vacation and have a good rest, or go to work early as usual. .

This is one of the busiest cities in the world, and Li Yan stayed here to study abroad.

On the left side of the street intersection in the living quarter leading to the subway crossing, Li Yan and a few residents were waiting for the green light. It was early again today. At seven o'clock, Miss Kagurazaka Ayame called him. Cell phones are bombarded constantly.