I am a master of light novels in Japan

Xuexia Xuena sits on a sunny cushion, with a delicate face, black and beautiful long hair falling on the table, white and a little hazy, and a shirt and school uniform that reveals a girlish atmosphere, all of which let the beauty of the girl be expressed. Extremely, she put the review materials on the textbook, her eyes calm as the sea, looking at Li Yan, and asked: "Is my light novel really so funny?"

Li Yan and Mr. Cat's hearts were immediately chilled, and she even cared about it.

Yukino Yukino immediately continued: "Please don't get me wrong. I didn't intend to laugh and get angry when you read the novel I wrote. The novel is for people to read. I can accept any evaluation. Bookshelf is a very rude behavior."

"But, is the novel I wrote really that bad? Seniors shouldn't admit their thoughts after laughing, so I hope seniors will tell me what they feel after reading them." Yukino Yukino asked.

Li Yan was silent for a while, and after finally tangled up a little, he understood what Yukoshita Yukino meant, nodded a few times, and began to say: "Understood, since you really want to understand, let me talk about my point of view. "

"Second Miss should rarely take the initiative to write light novels, but I have to praise Miss Er’s writing style is really good, although I can see that there is a way to imitate "Super Academy", but the writing style is more excellent."

Li Yan took out the paper and began to write the simple structure of the story described by Xuexia Xuena, and said seriously: "But it is easy for newcomer authors to misunderstand one point, that is, their proud work must be considered acceptable. In fact, writing requires a lot. Accumulation, such as the emotional capture of the characters, the plot is active but not boring, and the character design. Many people design the plot first and then design the characters. This is an easy mistake to make. You must let the set characters go Promote the plot, this is the most basic way of writing."

"Well……"

Xuexia Xuena sat opposite, looking at the draft's so professional plot structure analysis, she looked at the draft with some surprise, and couldn't help but look at Li Yan, who wrote the plot branch. Why did she feel that at this moment To the sense of gap.

"The story of the second lady was too limited at the beginning. I wrote everything that the characters should have to write. A strong female knight, and a follower who is always full of negative energy, a chaotic but kind-hearted female follower. Combat stories shouldn’t be written so sharply in one breath. You should let readers see the growth. This is the first point. The second point is the logic of the story. Many people will make mistakes, even It’s an old author. There is a contradiction in the paragraph you wrote. Second Miss, you must not take notes at any time. When you write, you forgot what the protagonist did before, but the protagonist and the entourage are very firm in saying that they haven’t done anything, readers It’s easy to spot this bug if you read it quickly."

Li Yan listed the bugs written by Xuexiaxuena and showed it to Xuexiaxuena, and said.

"That's it, it turns out that this is really wrong..." Xuexia Xuenai quietly looked at the plot tree chart listed by Li Yan, nodded, and said calmly.

Li Yan smiled and said: "If you try more, you will definitely make a lot of progress. It turns out that Miss No. 2 also likes writing. You can communicate more with each other when writing..."

"...Is it really okay? Will it bother you to write the eighth volume?"

She sat upright in front of Li Yan, looking calm and focused on Li Yan's plot map as clear water. That kind of beauty, as if the vicissitudes of the world could not be wiped out by the vicissitudes of the world, fresh and refined. But not a party.

Random inquiries, the voice is not very loud, but the delicate and deserted words shocked Li Yan slightly. Although Li Yan had a foreboding that she knew his identity, he still couldn't help looking at her in a little embarrassment and astonishment. .

"In any case, all the evidence collected so far proves that you are Uesugiyan-sensei... Sure enough, I guessed it right. Sister's words, I probably knew it early. In the cluttered world of light novels, I admit senior The story created is quite outstanding, so, if possible, Mr. Uesugiyan, a genius, I plan to add a writing subject to the summer tutoring subjects, okay?"

Xuexia Xuena raised her head, her pretty black bangs swayed slightly in the morning breeze, her piercing and beautiful eyes looked at him quietly, her calm face looked quite firm, and she did not hesitate to add to her course. In a special subject, he expressed his demands.

After a day of tutoring in mathematics, physics and chemistry, it soon became dark.

"Look, this is what everyone expects, this is a curse, you guys don't write the eighth volume well, and you will meet readers everywhere." Teacher Cat ate the sea fish and stared at Li Yan hypnotically.

"Just be quiet, I'm thinking about things!"

Li Yan saw through the cat teacher's attempt to hypnotize him and turned him into a [fiction code word machine]. When he was thinking and eating, he immediately stared at it angrily and said.

"Why do you like to deceive and procrastinate so much? The seventh volume is very exciting. I really want to see how the eighth volume develops. Other monsters have pushed this oversight duty to mine. It's not easy for me." Teacher Cat, ignoring Li Yan's resistance, continued.

Li Yan was silent for a while, looked at the cat teacher on the floor, and said thoughtfully: "I'm not good at writing, but I'm good at telling stories. In fact, in terms of writing, just like my Mandarin, it's not a pass... …It’s just that light novels have a relatively high tolerance for writing and grammatical errors, and the story is interesting. However, the instability of this line is very high, and readers’ interest will change. I can’t guarantee that I can keep writing and let Xuezhi Snow is to increase interest in this area, is it really okay?"

"Well, people have dreams to meet life. People are not monsters. There is not so much time to wait to verify which one is suitable and which one is not. You can let her learn it. It is also a common sense to shorten the path to confusion. , Besides, the other party does not seem to intend to write for the purpose of making money." Teacher Mao said.

“I don’t write for the purpose of making money... Maybe I’m all smelly of copper. I don’t think that unpaid writing will last longer, and there will be better quality and content guarantees. Writing is also a human labor. No matter what, the mentality of writing for free will not make progress. At the beginning, when you deny the value of your own work, how can you make readers face up to the value of the author’s work? How much must be directed towards a certain reward and purpose It is correct to write."

Li Yan denied Mr. Mao's point of view, and focused on the opinions he had been writing.

It should be said that President Li Yan perceives that Xuexia Xuena is really just trying, but it seems that he is really thinking about it...

At this moment, a doorbell came from the door of this house.

"Ms. Li, are you still eating?" Xuexiayangna asked at the door.

"It's finished, wait a moment."

Li Yan was taken aback for a moment, and responded.He was a little curious about what Xuexiayang was looking for at this time.

Teacher Cat suddenly jumped onto the table, bit a fried squid, and ran into the room wittily to enjoy it.

Li Yan looked at the cat teacher who ran into the room. He opened the door and saw this Yukoshita Yono with a signature smile on his face.

"Yeah, Teacher Li," she said hello.

"What's the matter, Miss?" Li Yan asked.

"Hee hee, your habitual greetings are so out of the ordinary, can't I find you if you have nothing to do? Um...have already eaten it, yes, I heard at the door just now who you are talking to and someone is coming ?"

Yukoshita Yono leaned forward, looked inside the house with a smile, and asked.

"...No, it's just a phone call, and the voice is a little loud." Li Yan was startled and immediately lied and prevaried.

"Ok……"

Yukoshita Yonoi pondered slightly. She clearly sounded at the door as if she was talking in the dining room. It was not like the sound from the phone at all, but perhaps she had made a mistake. She smiled and said, "No matter. Well, let me tell you something. Can I go to the half-empty garden of the apartment with beautiful scenery and suitable for dating?"

"...Why use some weird decorations to describe the half-empty garden of an apartment building?" Li Yan was silent, and couldn't help but spit out a few words.

It is now 7:30 in the evening, and on a summer night when the moon and stars are scarce, the high-end apartment buildings have specially arranged gardens in some vacant places to facilitate the residents to play. However, there are no people in the garden at this time, students have no intention to appreciate, and office workers It seems that I haven't returned from working overtime, leaving only the woods and flowers swaying and rustling in the night breeze, creating a unique mood.

"It's pretty here, isn't it?"

Xuexiayangna brought Li Yan to here, smiled and asked.

"Well, yes." Li Yan looked at the night view of the city of Chiba downstairs and nodded.

Standing under the snow in the garden, Yang Nai didn’t know if she was too tired from studying or tired from work. She couldn’t help stretching her body. It happened that such a move highlighted her proud chest and made Li Yan’s The eyes also noticed inertially for a moment, almost unable to move away.

It should be said that Li Yan judged that he should not be considered a womanizer, but he was troubled in his heart that his heart was really rippling, and he couldn't help but complain in his heart: "Why are the same parents born and the second lady inherited? Because of her mother's genes, Miss Yang Nai is unique...So even her figure is better than her younger sister, does the second lady care about her excellent sister so much?"

Of course Li Yan found some details about the sisters, although he was not sure whether his inner guess was correct.

"How is Xuenai-chan's review? Have you listened to your lecture seriously?" After Xuexiayangna relaxed his muscles, he opened one eye and closed one eye and asked with a sigh of relief.

"The review is not bad, the second lady's learning ability is very good, so she basically mastered everything I said." Li Yan replied.

Xuexia Yangna looked at the scenery and said casually, "Yes, that kid is very smart, but he always likes to play with little cleverness. It's really a headache... Maybe after being taught by you for a year, she dare to go. Enroll in Dongda University and meet you at the highest school in Japan when you are in your junior year."

Li Yan was silent for a while, not sure if this was a joke or true, and said: "I don't know the liberal arts in Dongda, but the math exam for science is still quite difficult. If she really plans to apply for Dongda, It is more appropriate to recommend her to learn more about the more famous training institutions in Tokyo."

"Just kidding, don't take it seriously... Li Jun is really a serious person. By the way, Li Jun is so good at writing novels, will he be a novelist in the future?" Xuexia Yangna looked at him and asked curiously.

"...This, I originally planned to give up writing novels and concentrate on studying hard in the direction of scientific research, but now I have changed my plan, and there are probably readers, I will write it down, but I plan to do both. I want to go a little further...a little greedy."

Li Yan smiled embarrassedly, and even complained and said.

"I don't dare to say anything about your words, but... Xue Nao-chan's words, I have some opinions." Xuexia Yangna raised his head, pressing the sky, and said.

"Ok?"

Li Yan was stunned for a moment, and looked at Yang Nai on the side. His conversation with Xue Nai was overheard.