Losing Money to Be a Tycoon

Meanwhile, a group of horses are also following Choi Geng's new book.

Although Ma Group is now the CEO of the Finish Point Chinese Language Network, focusing on the new book should be about the editors and editors, it is now just during the New Year, he is also idle at home.

For Choi Geng, the horse herd has also heard of his “Bad Spots”.

However, Choi Geng is talented.

A talented, hard-working author is no better than a talented, blind, hard-working author.

After all, web literature is a creative industry, and often it's not about how fast you write, it's about how well you write.

No, it's just speeding up the output of garbage.

The Butterfly Game is just a little short of a book, and the comment area is clearly no better.

The group of horses ignored these and started reading directly.

The beginning of the rhythm was quick. After taking the identity of the main character with you, you will get the gold finger directly. After briefly introducing the use of the gold finger, you will begin to enter the official plot.

On New Year's Eve, Choi Geng sent out five chapters, which had already completed a small plot.

Starting with the privilege of "Butterfly Games” for the protagonist and ending with helping the first protagonist complete his dream.

The content of the first little play is simple, equivalent to a rehearsal of the core.

An impoverished independent game maker who never gave up on his dreams, he created a game that was simple but interesting to play, but he was left with no money to advertise.

While observing the parallel world, the protagonist discovered him and, through his authority, found an UP owner of the gaming area and, using his golden fingers, let the UP owner "happen” to download the game and play it.

As a result, the game suddenly caught fire under the propaganda of the UP owner, and since then, the independent game producer has been able to continue his dream.

After watching this little scene, it was followed by a single chapter by Choi Gengfa.

The content of the single chapter is simple, on the one hand because of the apology to all readers about the old book, and on the other hand, to emphasize that this new book is well thought-out and absolutely wonderful. Please be patient. During the New Year's Eve, he decided not to leave the house, and every day was a thousand words more.

After watching all this, a bunch of horses got caught in contemplation.

He has been writing online novels for such a long time, and has been watching the movement of online novels lately, so naturally he can see some doorways.

Is there a problem with this novel? There must be.

But it also has advantages!

Novels on the market are still dominated by “do not bully the young poor" and mobilize readers' emotions, mainly through simpler and rough methods of repression, incitement to hatred and vengeance.

Metropolitan novels also have good development, but the whole thing hasn't jumped out of this big framework, many soldiers, school flowers, rebirth themes, refreshments are basically more traditional costumes to force the face.

And this novel, Butterfly Game, can be seen in the underlying architecture, which is very different from the novels that are currently popular.

Firstly, it reprogrammed the previous packages while maintaining a fast pace.

Most novels are still popular in the so-called "Golden Three Chapters”, a fixed cycle of “repression, obtaining gold fingers, punching faces”.

This routine can't be said to be bad, it's just that some of the trends have been rotten, and a lot of readers instinctively want to throw up after seeing it.

The Butterfly Game, on the other hand, completely abandoned this set of paths, without any repressive parts at the beginning, the protagonist got the gold finger directly, and there was no "punch in the face” plot, and went straight into his own unique refreshment.

Secondly, the novel is “awesome” and performs completely differently from other novels.

The current online novel is "simple and rude", commonly known as "pretending to punch you in the face”.

But the great thing about Butterfly Games is that it's a sneaky refreshment, and the protagonist creates butterfly effects in parallel worlds with a few minor changes through the light sphere in his hand, resulting in some interesting results.

The pleasure of the protagonist is not as obvious and more implicit as the traditional costume, but it also brings spiritual pleasure to the reader.

Moreover, without mentioning the accomplishments of the protagonists, if you replace yourself with a character in a book, such as the unwilling game maker, you can also get a sense of happiness.

This happiness is kind of like an adult fairy tale, and as you all know, most independent game producers, for lack of propaganda, make games that last nine lifetimes.

In reality, many independent game makers are reluctant to give up their game dreams, but in the novel, his dreams are realized by the "butterfly effect” made by the protagonist, which is also a pleasant feeling for the reader.

If the novel is now popular with red meat, then the novel is like a simple sugar-mixed tomato.

Red roasted meat is delicious, but when the table is full of all sorts of red roasted meat, a sugar mixed with tomatoes is bound to be snatched up quickly.

Not only that, but a bunch of horses seemed to see some of Tenda's shadows in this book.

He felt like the story was taken from President Pei, after all, when he was doing "The Lonely Desert Highway," it was suddenly red because of a video by Joe Lao Wet.

With the proceeds of this game, President Pei was only able to make the "Ghost General" to earn the first barrel of gold to set up Tenda Group.

So the story is, in the eyes of a bunch of horses, extraordinarily kind.

In view of these aspects, the horses have a hunch that if this book can be written, it will definitely be able to explode the Chinese language network at the end of the day!

But is this book perfectly written?

A bunch of horses think, not necessarily.

There are other places where you can make minor changes, and once you've done so, the book can go even further!

Just in time, Choi Gen doesn't write much yet. Turn around and change it!

Thinking about it, a group of horses called Choi Gen directly.

“Mr. Ma, I'm a code word! Don't worry, I'll definitely write this book and it won't end badly! Write at least two million words! ”

The group of horses have not yet spoken, and Choi Gen's side has already begun voting.

“Oh, guess how many times you've said that? ”

One word from a group of horses made Choi Geng mute.

“Well, that's not what I'm calling you about.” The horses laughed and came to the point, "I do want to tell you about the new book, but there are other things besides telling you to write it well and not to end it badly. ”

Choi Geng stunned: “Mr. Ma, please speak. ”

Ma group said: “I personally have some small opinions. Simply tell you, if you think it's appropriate, change it. If it's not suitable, forget it. It's also a group effort to write this book. ”

“I'm very fond of your book, so I want to help you sharpen it better. ”

Choi Geng was somewhat flattered: "You say. ”

The horses sort out their thoughts a little bit and elaborate on their thoughts.

“As I can see, the subject of the first little plot seems to be taken from President Pei. Tenda does have a lot of interesting stories to pick up, but I don't think you're doing enough artistic work. ”

“I have two main points to make:”

“First of all, I think the protagonist, as a pure bystander, is somewhat less involved in the plot. ”

“It's no big deal to think of the protagonist as a purely instrumental person, and some books do, but it would be more interesting if they could relate to the plot. ”

“This is what I imagine: the light sphere that the protagonist gets is not a parallel world, but the real world in which he lives. ”

“And every act of the protagonist is actually actually changing the world and making it better for the world in which he lives. ”

“At the same time, the protagonist can also benefit from his actions, for example, by helping an entrepreneur to build a hundred billion level business empire, and the protagonist can buy shares in the company with his own money before the empire is formed, so that he can earn substantial gains himself and change his life. ”

“Moreover, when the protagonists are involved in these interactions as a dark person, they can meet with the protagonists in real life, and many interesting plots can arise at this time. ”

“Secondly, I think the tone of the book could be changed. ”

“The current writing, mainly a positive narrative, is relatively straightforward. ”

“The direct thing is: what I'm going to do, what I'm going to do, I'm going to do it. ”

“While this approach is sound, it may not be very appealing to the reader. ”

“I wonder if we can further enhance the feeling of yin, yang and wrong in the 'Butterfly Game' in a counter-solicited narrative way to make the cool points more tortuous and the storyline more harmonious and humorous. ”

“Simply put: I didn't want to do anything, an accident happened, I did something against my will, but I succeeded. ”

“Specifically the first episode you wrote, the current refreshing overview is that the independent gamer wants to succeed, the protagonist helps him through the 'Butterfly Game', and the independent gamer succeeds. ”

“After the modification, the refreshing point can be like this: the independent gamemaker didn't want to succeed, he just wanted to play a game of revenge. The protagonist found the game interesting, helped him with the 'butterfly game’, and the independent gamemaker succeeded. ”

“In the process of writing, pay attention to some more harmonious and humorous writing, which should stand out in the current traditional drama. ”

“Understand?”

At the end of the phone, Choi Geng was silent and seemed to be trying to digest what a group of horses had just said.

It took a while for him to say, "Well," he said, "Ma always makes sense! ”

“Indeed, when I wrote this beginning, it always felt like something was missing. ”

“It's like a dish with all the ingredients and the fire, but it always lacks so much flavor! ”

“If these two dots can be filled, the book will certainly be even better! ”

“But… General Ma, I have a question. ”

A bunch of horses: "Hmm? What anxiety. ”

Choi Geng hesitated for a moment, which was why he said: “To be honest, the drama of the game producer was indeed taken from President Bae. ”

“But would this kind of writing now be a negative image of Pei in general? ”

“Bae won't take revenge, will he? ”