My Cartoonist Strategy
Chapter 45: Su Han's game text
[The words 41-44 have been revised. It is recommended that those who have read the previous novels read before July 14th should read it again because there will be some differences.
When Xi Mumo saw Ji Yinxuan, who was behind Shen Xin and entered the living room, the book in his hand dropped on the ground with a snap, his mouth slightly open, and he was speechless in surprise.
Ji Yinxuan nodded slightly to Xi Muzhu and sat on the sofa, but the little girl was still at a loss, and finally, reminded by Shen Xin, she remembered the guests at home and quickly made a cup of black tea for Ji Yinxuan.
When coming to the kitchen, Xi Mumo secretly asked Shen Xin: "Brother, who is this girl? It's so beautiful."
"She? The student president of Yunhai University." Shen Xin took a bottle of mineral water from the refrigerator.
"Student president? Then what is she doing here? Did you get caught doing something? Isn't she coming to visit?" Xi Mumo said in a panic.
"What are you talking about? She wants me to design her game." Shen Xin said casually.
"Why did you bring her here?" Xi Mumo bulged his cheek, somewhat dissatisfied.
"You can't talk about these things in the studio?" Shen Xin asked.
Xi Mumo blinked, and it seemed that Shen Xin was right.
Put the teacup in front of Ji Yinxuan, and Xi Muyu immediately became the adjacent couch.
After Ji Yinxuan said "Thank you", she picked up her tea cup gracefully and took a sip.
Shen Xin sat down and put the file bag on the table, "Okay, can I read the text of the game now?"
Ji Yinxuan slightly nodded, "please."
Xi Mumo also leaned over, staring at the text in Shen Xin's hand.
"What's wrong?" Shen Xin puzzled.
"No, I just wanted to see." Xi Mumo said with interest.
"This is a love script." Shen Xin reminded.
"Oh, I've been reading romance novels recently, and I also read "Y's", isn't it also in love?" Xi Mumo asked.
This is really the case.
Shen Xin scratched her head. The love novels brought by Sister Yan were almost read by the little girl.
Ji Yinxuan raised his head and looked at Xi Muyu, feeling a little surprised. Then he lowered his head and looked at the black tea that was held in his hands.
Shen Xin didn't argue with Xi Mumo anymore, he focused on the text, and Xi Mumo's eyes were fixed on the script.
""The Trouble of Choice"?"
Shen Xin read the title lightly and felt that the title of the book was not good.He hopes that this line of text is the title of a chapter rather than the title of the book.
Afterwards, Shen Xin turned the title page, and he and Xi Mumo scanned the text quickly.
Different books have different reading methods.
Books such as masterpieces need to be "chewed slowly", while online novels need not be so elaborate.
The text of the game is slightly different from the online novel, but Shen Xin just wants to know the outline of the story and only seeks to understand the meaning of it, so the speed of turning pages is very fast.
Before going through it, Shen Xin read more online novels, basically read a million words a day, and read very fast. Of course, this also benefited from the "flushing method" of online novels, read one or two chapters less, I didn't feel anything missing.
I remember that some authors missed a chapter and turned back to apologize to the reader.The reader said, it does not matter, the rhythm is just right.This makes the author very embarrassed.
About half an hour later, Shen Xin read the main idea of the text.Xi Mumo took the text from Shen Xin and continued to sort out the text.
At first, Shen Xin felt that the title of the book was not good, but now I have to admit that the title and the story are still matched.
In the game, the character controlled by the player is an ordinary high school boy, but he has the enviable peach blossom.The male protagonist and the female neighbor of the sweetheart are the same classmates, and at the same table is the female favorite of the male protagonist,
In the first part of the game, there were four girls who were closely related to the actor.As a galgame, Shen Xin believes that this number should be enough.The different choices of players in the game will affect the favorability of different characters, so choose different side missions and achieve different endings. This part also requires a lot of text. At the same time, the length of the game can also be controlled in a suitable range.
Shen Xin then picked up "Character Setting".
The character setting is very thin, only five or six pages, Shen Xin turned a page or two, suddenly felt something wrong, quickly turned the character setting again, counted the number of characters above, a black line.
There are a total of 11 characters in this game. Except for the protagonist, the rest are all girls, and most of them are around fifteen or sixteen years old.
"Sister, what does the following text look like?" Shen Xin asked Ji Yinxuan.
"It's similar to this part." Ji Yinxuan raised his head, but his eyes were a little slack, "What do you think of the text."
"To be honest, it's not good. If you want me to draw, it's best to change the script, at least to my satisfaction. If you don't want to change the script, then you have to find another person to set the character. Sorry." Shen Xinyi Apologies.
"Is it really bad?" Ji Yinxuan asked quickly.
"Sister Xue is also a person who has done games. Even if it is a galgame game, you should have more contacts than me. A galgame has ten heroines, the settings are similar, there is no freshness. At least, the character's personality, appearance, origin ...Should these be different? Cute, arrogant, gentle, cold... There should be one for each type of female character, so that players will only think about the "two weeks" after one of the characters in the "Raiders" ', Raiders other characters."
To be honest, Shen Xin was a bit depressed.
After crossing, in his field of vision, the author who appears most frequently is Su Han."Shaky" is okay. After all, anti-traversal rarely appears in this world, which is regarded as an innovation, and "Punishment" let Shen Xin connect her with the big thrush.
Therefore, he also has high expectations for this text.
Ji Yinxuan's previous attitude actually told Shen Xin that there may be a problem with this work, but he still has a fluke mentality, but he did not expect this to be the result.
"Sure enough." Jixin Xuan's eyes were faint, he took a cup of tea and took a sip of tea. "I can also see that these things are more like novels than the text of the game. But let me type the code and write The article is not enough to read. I cannot change such a large text at all."
"Then find someone to write it." Shen Xin said casually.
"Who are you looking for? No one wants to write such a large text. Moreover, Xiao Su's energy is also on "Penalty", and he has no time to care for him." Jixin Xuan sighed.
Shen Xin thought about it, and what Ji Yinxuan said was also true.Even college students, very few people will be exposed to the creation of game text.
"That... can I say a word?" Xi Mumo raised his hand quietly.
"Of course." Ji Yinxuan nodded.
Xi Mumo took a deep breath, "Did Sister Su Han never fall in love?"
"Eh?" Jixin Xuan was surprised, and then looked up for half a minute, "It seems like it is not, can you see it?"
"Yeah. Although the female characters and the male characters are connected, but when the male character talks to one of the female characters, the other female characters standing next to it feel justified, there is no feeling of jealousy, I think Not normal." Xi Mumo said.
"That's right. Because Xiao Su hasn't been in love, so I don't know what the status is between lovers." Ji Yinxuan nodded again and again, looking at Xi Mumo's eyes, the more bright, "Sister, you should not talk Are you in love?"
Shen Xin immediately became alert and looked at Xi Mumo with vigilance.
"Why!" Honglu instantly climbed to the ear of Xi Mumo. "It's all written in love novels, and... Xin Ge's comics are also mentioned. I'm just returning...induction recently."