My Cartoonist Strategy
Chapter 47 Modified Thinking
"Do not rewrite the new script? What are you going to do?" Ji Yin was surprised.
Xi Mumo looked at Shen Xin puzzled.
"Looking at Xiao Yun's face, I will make an exception to talk about my thoughts. Isn't the first part with four female characters? Three of the girls are students and one student is a teacher. Then pull out two from the following chapters The girls form a society, and the only teacher can serve as the instructor."
"What's the difference between this and what Xiao Yun said?" Ji Yinxuan puzzled.
Xi Mumo nodded again and again, she also wanted to know the difference between the two.
"Of course there is a difference, the purpose of creating a club is different. What Xiao Yun said is to create a club for the purpose of falling in love, they and the protagonist did not know before, but the club I said is for the purpose of competing for the male lead. I have known each other since the beginning. Everyone wants to interact with the man, but he does not want to give others a chance."
"Wait... if so, the text written by Su Han can be applied to this framework. You need to delete some characters and content related to them, and then rearrange them to add the branch task of the game." Jixin Xuan suddenly realized , "In this case, it can really shorten the time for finishing the script. Shen Xin, sure enough your idea is better."
Xi Mumo blinked, his face confused.
"Is the reform of Brother Xin just to shorten the time to modify the script?"
"Of course it is more than that. The most important point of the method Shen Xin said is to give players a sense of substitution. The game we are making this time is galgame, and the target players are boys. If it is the kind of proposal you said Several excellent girls did not fall in love, and formed a community, and then chose a boy as a partner, assuming you were that boy, how would you feel?" Jixin Xuan asked.
"Lucky... Should this sense of luck be passed on to players?"
"Yes, it can be passed on to the player-yes, "I" was lucky to have become her boyfriend. But at the same time, "player" may have another idea, "I" is a test article. They only found me in order to try to fall in love, not for other reasons.
"Shen Xin's idea did not have this concern. The reason why so many beautiful girls form a society is because of'I'. All they do is to make'I' happy and win'I'. If you Is this boy feeling different?"
Ji Yinxuan's cheeks were rosy and his eyes glowed.
This is her biggest mood swing tonight, because the game has a new idea.
Xi Mumo nodded slowly, "It seems that this is the case, there is indeed a sense of vanity in my heart. Brother Xin, how do you think you want to write this way?"
Shen Xin rolled his eyes. I was also an online writer. Although I was only a third-rate writer, I still knew some basic points.
"In the script written by Su Han, the number of characters in the game should be greatly reduced, and the events related to the character can be retained as a branch of the game and spread on other characters." Shen Xin reminded Ji Yinxuan.
"Yes." Ji Yinxuan nodded again and again, "This is better than the method I said, only need to adjust the structure of the story, and make small adjustments, at most one month, you should be able to adjust the story. Wait for the script to write Okay, let’s do the character setting again. In this way, I will go to the editor-in-chief and communicate with him to ask you to be the person to set up. If he does not agree, I will start with the loopholes in the contract."
"Don't be so troublesome? Just draw a few sketches, then you don't have to say it." Shen Xin waved his hand.
"No!" Jixin Xuan categorically rejected Shen Xin's statement, "Human design is very important for the production of the game. I don't allow such an important role, because of a leaky contract, I was forced to move behind the scenes. And, for you, this fame is also important?"
Shen Xin silently.
For a cartoonist,
"So, you don't have to worry about this matter, I will arrange it properly." Jixin Xuan did not give Shen Xin a chance to intervene, and he finalized the matter directly, "But I am looking for something to negotiate with "New World", It may have to be dragged back a bit. After all, the text has not yet come out, and I am not very good at negotiating."
Shen Xin nodded. After all, he decided to deny the cooperation with Jixin Xuan after reading the script. Therefore, Jixin Xuan's approach is better for both parties.
Seeing that Shen Xin and Ji Yinxuan had finalized the cooperation, only some details were left undiscussed, Xi Mumo was anxious.
"Wait... Brother Xin, wouldn't I be useless?"
Huh?
Shen Xin and Ji Yinxuan looked at Xi Mumo's face full of puzzles.
"Just delete a few characters, and add the deleted role to other characters. Can these things be done by anyone?" Xi Mumo was unhappy.
Ji Yinxuan shook his head again and again.
"Of course not. The point you just said is correct, because Xiao Su has never been in love, so the character shaping is very unsuccessful. When facing the male character, the expression and tone of speech can't grasp the feeling of love at all. ——The character is too sensible, it should be related to her good at reasoning novels.
"I need to embody the content of love in the text. The character's character shaping also determines the character's image. As a cartoonist, should Shen Xin understand how important the character is?"
Shen Xin nodded his head, although he knew that this would increase Xi Mumo's workload a lot, but what Ji Yinxuan said was also true.
"Really?" Xi Mumo's eyes brightened again, and he was even a little happy in his heart.
"But the scrutiny of the script is an iterative process. Sometimes a character may be remembered by the reader because of a sentence, so I hope you can be prepared to change the script. But rest assured, I will also help . Don’t worry.” Jixin Xuan comforted.
"I... no problem." Xi Mumo clenched his fists. "I should... no, I can write a good script. However, Xin brother, you said that those girls form a society for the purpose of'competing the actor'." At that time, I was thinking about a question. Since the heroines all like the heroes, they should be the enemy of each other, so why do they even form a society?"
"Eh?"
Shen Xin was stunned. He just said it casually just now, never thinking about this problem.
"Yeah, I also want to know." Ji Yinxuan asked seriously.
"Well..." Shen Xin wiped the sweat on his forehead. How do I know, I just thought it would be fun.
"Of course, there must be a reason..." Shen Xin's brain spun quickly.
"Well." Xi Mumo nodded, like a good student listening carefully.
"For example...that's right!" Shen Xin snapped a finger, "For example, because of the protagonist's affairs, they repeatedly set off in the school. In order to ensure the tranquility of the school, the principal felt that letting them form a community only in certain areas Internal activities, this is better for other students."
After speaking, Shen Xin secretly admired himself, and he was able to get the loophole back in such a short time.
"Is this okay?" Xi Mumo looked incredible.
"No problem. Unless it is a game of inferential nature, other types, such as developmental games, can have logical loopholes. Shen Xin said the idea is like telling a joke, but it really works." Jixin Xuan nodded. Said.
"Okay, today is the end." Shen Xin stood up from the sofa. "The follow-up matter is yours. Don't contact me again before the script comes out."
"Also, it's very late, and I should go back." Ji Yinxuan stood up and bowed slightly to Shen Xin and Xi Mumo.
"Has your housekeeper returned?" Shen Xin asked.
"It doesn't matter, I just contact her. As for the contract, I respect your meaning. After a few days, I will bring the contract and explain the pros and cons. If you think this is a kind of restraint, you can not sign it. , But it should be your interest, I will never default." Jixin Xuan said like two people when he first went out.
Shen Xin nodded slightly, the contract is a guarantee of the interests of both parties, but some people really do not like to sign the contract, so Ji Yinxuan really asked them for their opinions.
"Since business matters are involved, should you sign a contract? When there is a problem, you can talk." Shen Xin said.
"OK, then we will see you in a few days."
Shen Xin sent Ji Yinxuan to the outside of the community, until Ji Yinxuan got in the car, he turned around and went home.