My Cartoonist Strategy

Xiao Li quickly put away her smile, but it was too late.

After Song Tai's eyes stayed on her for a few seconds, she turned around again and asked Li Jiming, "What do you suggest for this comic?"

"He's just a painter who is not very solid, but the settings and stories are very good, and the storyboard is also atmospheric. Now rarely can I meet such an excellent painter." Li Jiming said his opinion.

"Apart from the painter, what are his shortcomings?" Song Tai asked.

"And?" Li Jiming scratched his head and could not remember for a while.

Song Tai looked at Xiaoli again, "I heard that you said that this name has shortcomings in the serial meeting?"

"Ah?" Xiao Li opened her mouth slightly, her head a little dazed, and said subconsciously, "Well."

"What are the shortcomings, I will listen, except for the painter." Song Tai asked.

"Disadvantages..." Xiao Li's forehead showed sweat, and her throat was a little dry. "Yes. Of course it is not a painter. Although his painter is not solid, but the comics with good painters and good mirroring are not necessarily good comics. This one The biggest problem with the work is the story."

"Story?" Song Taiweilen, he had never thought it would be the problem of the story.

"This story is very novel. How could it be a problem? Are you having a problem?" Li Jiming sneered.

"Of course there is a problem!" Xiao Li couldn't stand Li Jiming's sarcasm, disregarding Yan Fei's expression, and said without hesitation, "This comic story is too scattered!"

"what?"

"Too loose?"

"What is Taisan?"

The people in the house were confused, and even Yan Fei didn't know what Xiaoli was thinking.

"Too casual? How can there be such shortcomings?" Li Jiming sneered.

Song Tai's eyes swept the name of the first sentence, "I think the story is okay, what's the matter with you being too casual?"

Xiao Li knew that everyone else was looking at her, and knew that she had no room to look back. She could only say daringly: "President, you will finish reading the three words in one breath and you will know."

Song Tai questioned the letter and read the three words.

Starting from the second episode, the protagonist left the prefecture, looking for the cause of the puppet, but never found it. At the end of the second episode, he returned to Huang Quan again.

Due to the previous experience, Huang Quan’s guards were doubled than before, and his soul entered Huang Quan one after another.

Just when he thought that the last puppet was just an accident, he suddenly realized that the souls in the back formed puppets again, tried to devour the nearby souls, and walked towards the local government officials. The war was triggered.

The third episode is nothing complicated. The protagonist and the puppet launched an exciting battle.

"San...Where?" Song Tai looked up and looked at Xiaoli again after reading it.

Li Jiming saw Xiaoli with a tangled face, a slightly curled mouth, and smiled inadvertently.

"Scattered...the structure of its story." Xiao Li's words were hesitant. "There is a problem with the structure of its story."

"What you said is too false? Is there anything wrong with the structure?" Li Jiming asked rhetorically.

"Brother Li, you are also an old editor and you should be clear. The first reason why you have more than 50 pages is to use a small high tide to attract readers, and then the story will slowly unfold. And for the fictional world Background, the first sentence has to be involved, and the second sentence must be expanded, right?"

"That's right. Cough cough...Mr. Fat Dahai painted the same way, is there any problem?" Li Jiming asked.

"Yes. The name of "Ghost Trend" is drawn in three words. I ask you, what is the relationship between the title of the book and the story? Three words and "Ghost Trend" are not explained clearly. Is the structure still intact? I remember Shen In the first words, the teacher pointed out the origin of the title of "Y's", and the following stories have been around Yizhi and Yigui. But "Ghost Trend", until now,

On the contrary, Li Jiming was at a loss, and he didn't know how to excuse him for a while.

Song Tai nodded slightly, "It's so interesting. The first three words really emphasize the plot, but ignore the theme that the comic needs to express the most. Lao Li, you shouldn't make this mistake."

"I was careless... this situation will never happen next time." Li Jiming quickly explained.

He only had to consider whether the story was brilliant, but he forgot to arrange the plot.

"Sure? Teacher Fatty Sea has a good idea, and the storyboarding is also good, but the story needs to be tempered a little bit, after all, he is also a powerful newcomer to "New World". Just other..." Song Tai knocked on two When I got off the table, I suddenly passed the name to Xiaoli, "Xiaoli, you and "Ghost Trend" in the future, after all you are young people, it is not easy to have a generation gap. By the way, communicate and let him change the pen name. Lao Li, you Also take time to improve your business."

"what?"

"Eh?"

Li Jiming and Xiao Li both exclaimed in surprise.

Things reversed a little bit faster.

"Xiao Li, you have to follow up and try to bring out another "Y's". Song Ren, quickly find the audio of the seiyuu and send it to Teacher Shen." Song Tai waved his hand and motioned everyone to leave.

Xiaoli was relieved when she left the office.

Li Jiming snorted coldly, didn't talk much, went downstairs angrily, and Song Ren also entered the elevator.

Xiao Li has been holding Yan Fei's hand tightly and came to rest in the reception room.

"Sister Yan, Mr. Shen really saved her life." Xiao Li opened the conversation immediately after sitting down.

"Teacher Shen Xin?" Yan Fei guessed.

"Who else besides him?" Xiao Li nodded again and again.

"Have he never seen this name?"

"No. But what I said was his comment on the "Fat Sea" short story. I just used it to apply it. As a result, his novel really had a problem with its structure. Sister Yan, I want to take the time to visit Teacher Shen, is that okay?"

Yan Fei was shocked for a while, and then found that Xiao Li's hands on the table were shaking.She can understand Xiaoli's current mood. This newcomer is expected by many people. In the event that she doesn't get up in the end, Xiaoli, as the editor in charge, will definitely be responsible.

If Shen Xin could be given one or two suggestions, maybe she could give Xiaoli some ideas or confidence.

"right now?"

"When will he have time?" Xiao Li looked forward.

"Weekend? Now he should be busy drawing manuscripts, not much time. By the way, don't you want to hand over with Li Jiming?" Yan Fei asked.

"I'm going now. He just mocked me like that, now it's time for me to fight back. I just like to see him angry and bullied." Xiaoli said with a laugh.

Yan Fei tapped on Xiao Li's forehead. "Okay, don't make him hurry."

"Yes!" Xiaoli twisted her neck, her face excited.

This week, Xiao Li and Li Jiming completed the work handover. At the same time, she also saw the "fat sea". As expected, she was a little Zhengtai, whose name was Zhou Yang, and she was a little shy and a good talker. .

At first, Xiaoli thought that Zhou Yang was difficult to contact, but after the exchange, he knew that he had nothing special except shyness, and he was more talkative. Besides, Xiaoli was most surprised. That is, he has some clothes, including many women's clothes.

Isn't it the women's wear?

Noting Xiaoli's bright eyes, and even the corners of her mouth flooding, Zhou Yang immediately declared that these were not his things, but Xiaoli didn't believe it at all.