My Cartoonist Strategy

"Al! Alphonse! Damn...it shouldn't be like this! Brute... snatched by him!"

A teenager who lost his left leg lay prone on the ground, looking at the magic circle painted on the ground, and roared.

As soon as the screen changed, it was a page spread, with a magic circle drawn on it-by setting, Shang Haozhi knew that this magic circle was called "refined formation"-gears and steel, and a burly armored man And a teenager.

This page explains the background.

There are formations, indicating different worlds, and gears, indicating that it is not the Middle Ages, and the two people in the picture, needless to say, are the two protagonists of the story.

After turning this page, the story of "Fullmetal Alchemist" officially began.

The two protagonists came to a small town and heard that the leader of the Sun religion could create "miracles". The protagonist scoffed at this, but accidentally heard that the leader could bring the boyfriend of the young girl Rosanne back to life.

Edward and his younger brother Al told Rosanne that he was an atheist and believed that in a sense, scientists are the closest to God, and Rosanne did not believe his words at all.

At the same time, the subordinate of the leader also found the arrival of Edward, a national alchemist.

After the two sides met, the leader's subordinates shot Ar's helmet and other subordinates also stopped Edward.

Just when his subordinate held a pistol and wanted to kill Edward, Al, who had just taken off his helmet, grabbed his hand.

"what!"

Al lost his head, but he was still active, which was beyond the imagination of ordinary people. What was more terrible was that the black piece of armor inside could not see the blood at all.

In his trance, Ayre hit the face with a genuine iron fist.

Then, Edward and Al finally met the leader.

Edward used language to excite the leader, who was deceived.

Roshan, hiding in the armor, not only heard the ambition of the leader, but also knew his attitude towards believers.

"...Yes! I deceived those idiots!"

Rosanne questioned the leader, but the leader took out the "killer's resurrection".

In the end, Rosanne chose to give up resistance and submit to the leader.

"Sorry, even if he lied to me, I can only do this. The only person I can rely on is him..."

Helplessness and compromise are reflected in Roshan's body.

She knew the leader was lying to her, but what about it?In order to revive her lover, she can only trust the leader.

The leader angered Edward and Ayr, and immediately released a synthetic beast to let him fight with Edward.

After a few rounds, Synthetic Beast bit on Edward's arm, but Edward was not injured.

"Look at Roshan clearly." Edward kicked the synthetic beast and pulled off the tattered coat. His right arm appeared in the vision of the leader and Roshan. "This is the body's cultivation, which violates the'God's realm'." Price!"

Shang Haozhi read the first words in one breath, and even had no time to gasp, he could not wait to get the second and third words.

Edward defeated the leader, and at the same time, Roshan also learned that the cultivation of the human body was unachievable.

In an instant, the spiritual pillar supporting her collapsed.

"You tell me... In the future, what do I have to rely on to survive?" Luo Shan burst into tears.

Sometimes people are strong and know that hope is slim, but as long as there is one thousandth or even one ten thousandth of hope, they will stick their teeth and stick to it.

People are sometimes very fragile. When hope is gone, the whole person may collapse in an instant.

"That's something you have to consider, don't you have sturdy feet on your body? Going forward, rely on it."

Edward and Al left this sentence for her as she passed by Rosanne.

The story does not end there.

When the head teacher returned to the church in a panic, he saw a woman and a big fat man waiting for him in the church.The synthetic beast has been eaten by the big fat man.

"Cyborg……"

Shang Haozhi took out the design,

The woman is called Rust, the fat man is called Gratoni, and the fake "Sage Stone" in the hands of the leader is given by these two people...

The story ended after Gratoni ate the leader, but also left a lot of doubts.

What is the sage stone?Why are there fakes?What is the identity of these two people?

These doubts made Shang Haozhi eager to know the next plot.

He closed his eyebrows but didn't stretch, but his arms were wrapped around his eyes.

After reading these three words, his most intuitive thought was to do it in one go.

If other comics tell a story in the first sentence and leave clues at the end to attract the reader to continue reading, then this comic uses three words to achieve this.

Is the content bloated?

No, on the contrary, the story is very compact, the plot and the storyboard are very exciting, and firmly attracts his energy.

The reason for spending three words and telling a story is because there is only one reason, which is to explain the setting of comics.

Alchemy, equivalence exchange, human body refining, sage stone, synthetic beast, national alchemist, etc. are all mentioned, and at the same time, the title of the book is explained-because Edward is fitted with steel The prosthetic "mechanical armor".

There is no big setting, as far as he knows, there is only the "gate of truth".

How to express these settings through three words?

In fact, not many, but this approach is not very common.

However, Shang Haozhi understands Shen Xin's approach. The plot of this book has a large degree of need to be set to advance. If it is not so set, I am afraid that the plot cannot go forward.

But divided into three words, the length is too long.The first three key words of a book are actually talking about the same thing, which is really wasteful.

Compressed content?

It's not already very compact in itself, how can it be compressed again?

After thinking about it, Shang Haozhi didn't think of a suitable solution.

The deputy editor-in-chief Zeng Yue leaned over and tapped the table twice, "Old lady, I looked at it twice... Haven't I?"

Shang Haozhi handed over the setting to Zeng Yue and continued to think about the solution.

Wang Wenhong secretly glanced at Shang Haozhi, seeing him silent, sighing secretly.

Shen Xin urged Wang Wenhong to let him mention to Shang Haozhi that the simultaneous serialization in the 11th district is not the best opportunity now, but he can't say it.

If it is said too late, it will be too late when the time for the publication of "Steelmaking" is confirmed.

After contemplating again and again, Wang Wenhong decided to stand up from his seat and came to Shang Haozhi, "General Shang, I have something to tell you."

"Ok?"

Shang Haozhi looked up at Wang Wenhong.

"It is not appropriate to speak here." Wang Wenhong whispered.

Shang Haozhi nodded and got up, "Then go to the meeting room?"

Wang Wenhong followed Shang Haozhi into the meeting room and closed the door with his backhand.

"what's up?"

"This is the case. Teacher Shen wants me to ask if there is any hope that this comic will be serialized in District 11."

"Ah? District 11?"

Shang Haozhi was taken aback for a moment, and he immediately thought of "Young Leap".

"Soul of Chess" is also serialized on "Leap of the Teenager", opening a small market in the 11th district for "ComicFuture". The quality of "Steel" is also very high. Is there a chance?

If "ComicFuture" wants to go out of China, it must have a fist product. The last one is "Soul of Chess". Will this one be "Steel"?

Shang Haozhi rubbed his chin and wondered whether "Steel" had a chance to walk out of China.

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