My Cartoonist Strategy

Chapter 371 The Disadvantages of "Steelmaking"

"I think we should fight for it, otherwise, we will regret it."

After Shang Haozhi and Wang Wenhong left, the editor-in-chief and group leaders of "Leap Boys" sat around the conference table and continued to work on "Steel".

Kotani is very confident in "Steel" and Shen Xin. After the meeting started, he gave his own evaluation.

Yasuda kept silent, tugging fingers with both hands.

Murakami looked at Kotani with a little vigilance, for fear of being misled by him.

After seeing the first words of "Steelmaking", Kotani had great expectations for "Steelmaking". Now that he has witnessed the setting, he is even more appreciative of "Steelmaking".

If Kotani has the right to sign a contract, Murakami has no doubt that Kotani will immediately pick up the pen and write his name on the contract.

"Why?"

Murakami will not make decisions based on the words of one or two people.

In addition to wanting to know everyone's attitude towards this comic, he also needs to know the reason.

"Does this need to be said?" Murakami coughed. "I know that many people will have an idea. If they can find substitutes in China, why would they borrow others? Obviously the cost will be higher. But I don't think, " Can I find a substitute for this type of comics in Steelwork?"

"Mr. Shen's painting skills don't need to be talked about. Everyone has a lot to see. Even if it is "Leap", how many cartoonists can be compared to Mr. Shen? You can say it. When the "Slam Dunk" came out, I think Teacher Yuchuan is not worse than Teacher Shen, but do you still think so?

"Don't talk about the plot, nor the peace setting, just look at the painting skills. Teacher Shen's style of the first words in "The Soul of Chess" is much different from the last one. Don't need to say more? Although we are reading drafts, However, people always see it, how does it compare with "Soul of Chess"? I feel more mature.

"The settings of "Steel" are also good. I don’t want to talk about alchemy and the gate of truth. The settings like mechanical armor, artificial man, and human pillar are also very new. In particular, these settings are not It exists alone and has a great correlation with each other. In addition, "Steel" is also good. In particular, the character fighting is very smooth. If I am an ordinary reader, I can’t see it at all. Realistic comics."

Kotani said a lot in one breath, and Yasuda felt that his words were a bit exaggerated, but when I looked back carefully, I also thought that Kotani was right, "Steel" does have these characteristics.

"Team leader Kotani, I know you like Mr. Shen's work, but you can't just mention the advantages, not the disadvantages."

The middle-aged man with short broken hair and a Chinese face raised objections.

Otani frowned and glanced at the speaker.

This man, like him, is the leader of "Leap Leap", Nomura is worth.

Murakami crossed his fingers and looked at Nomura expectantly. "What are the shortcomings? Tell me? Let's discuss together."

Nomura nodded, "This is a bloody adventure comic, shouldn't it be right?"

The people sitting nodded.

"Team leader Kotani just said one thing right. From the first few words, Mr. Shen is really not like a newcomer to adventure comics. Those fighting breakups are better than many cartoonists, but they are only limited to breakups. Everyone Maybe I have doubts about my words. Please recall the setting of "Steel". For an adventure comic, "Steel" lacks a very critical link, it does not have a complete power system!"

Power system!?

The word immediately appeared in the minds of others.

Yasuda nodded again and again, "Yes. I said, it seems that something is missing, "Steel" lacks a complete power system."

A part of the power system is to classify different roles according to their strength.

"Just like a ninja, there are different types of Ninja, Ninja, and Ninja. Without considering the "leapfrogging", Ninja is better than Ninja, and Ninja is better than Ninja.

"In order to ensure that each character's strength is not disordered during the story, the cartoonist must divide the strength of the character.

""Steel" does not have these... Just like Ska, it is said that he killed a lot of national alchemists, then, I would like to ask why other countries alchemists can not kill him? His strength, in the whole What is the level in the comics? The protagonist is weaker than him? How should I judge their strength if they are a reader? More importantly, if there is no complete power system, how can the reader be objective Feeling the progress of the protagonist? Is such a comic still a kingly comic?"

In the face of Nomura's aggressive inquiries, Otani said.

He has always been fascinated by the setting of "Steel", but he just forgot the power system.

In the later period of Wang Dao Comics, if there is a collapse, the most likely collapse is the power system.

The protagonist's upgrade is too slow, the rhythm will be dragged down, and the plot will not burn; the upgrade is too fast, and in the middle period, the protagonist is invincible, and the subsequent plot cannot progress.

Generally speaking, when the protagonist upgrades, it has to be linked to the plot, which is where the editors are more concerned.

"Steel" does not have this division.

Shen Xin may have forgotten it, but this possibility is minimal.

Complex settings can be made, and power division cannot be achieved.

It really doesn't work, there is the simplest division, like what B, A, S, SS.

Or alternatively, the same national alchemist can also be divided into bronze, silver, gold, etc. according to different strengths.

However, in the settings and context, this content is not involved at all.

This shows that all national alchemists are at the same level, and there is no difference.

"I'm afraid...Mr. Shen never thought of grading it? Of course, the higher the strength, the stronger the ability, but a good person cannot have only strength, but also needs..." Middle-aged man with messy hair suddenly said , Pointing to his temple, "intellect."

Murakami glanced at the deputy editor-in-chief, Nishida Abu, and also snapped his fingers, "So, how to reflect the progress of the protagonist?"

"Isn't there a "gate"?" Nishida asked.

"Eh?"

Others forgot the "door".

"Mr. Shen wrote very clearly. You can see the truth by opening the door. According to the "equivalent exchange", since you want to lose a part of your body, you will also get a part of the door. What exactly is this part of me? Perhaps this is the key to thinking about it. To be honest, I think it’s too easy for people to read this comic-since it involves life, the content will not be easy.

"As for how to embody the progress of the protagonist... In fact, in the first sentence, Edward also said that alchemists are scientists, and the achievements of scientists are not divided by force, but by wisdom. If the progress of the story is similar to my thoughts, I think this comic has the value of serialization."

Nishida first expressed his views.

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