My Cartoonist Strategy

"Xiaohan is not here?" Yan Fei finished drinking and took a sip of Coke.

The ice-drinked drink entered her stomach and shocked her whole body. The exhaustion of her working day was swept away. Before she could put down her cup, Wang Wenhong handed another pot of coffee.

"Will use it later." Wang Wenhong saw Yan Fei confused, reminded in good faith.

Yan Fei took the coffee and put it on the table, at the same time, picked up the last four words.

These four words were drawn by Shen Xin according to the plot of the movie version.

In the movie, L used a rule of DN to avoid the fate of the first death.

Moon used the life of Haisha as a bargaining chip, forcing Rem to write the name of L Hedu on DN. At the same time, Rem prolonged Haisha’s life and turned it into sand. At the same time, Rem’s DN was also hand-made by her. Ruined.

Seeing L's heart palsy and "dead" month with his own eyes, I forgot to kill the other people in the investigation team. During the confrontation with his father, he personally admitted that he was Kira. Kill.

In the future, Shen Xin used the plot of the comic again. After the death of the moon, the world was still surrounded by crime, and a small number of people began to miss Kira...

After reading it, Yan Fei became so addicted that he kept thinking about these four words.

"I didn't expect to die together..."

"How is it?" Wang Wenhong asked.

"Yes. I think this ending is very good." Yan Fei nodded, and the plot could echo the previous plot.

"Logic?" Shen Xin asked.

"Logic?" Yan Fei raised her eyebrows, "shouldn't it be a big problem?"

"Sister Yan, you look at it again." Shen Xin smiled bitterly.

Yan Fei is full of spirits. Since Shen Xin said this, it means that there should be a logical problem in these four words.

She picked it up and looked at it again.

This time it was more detailed than before, and the connection between every word was remembered in my heart.

After watching it again, Wang Wenhong asked again: "What is the logic problem?"

"One thing. After L was released, L was still wary of the month, and even put down the camera at Haisha's residence. Finally, he successfully replaced the fake DN...not quite reasonable. Why does L continue to follow Haisha? What? There is always a reason?"

Shen Xin snapped his fingers, "Yes, this is it, but there are explanations."

When he said this, he seemed full of confidence. In fact, he didn't have much confidence in his heart.

The logic of the first half of "DN" is quite rigorous, and it is difficult to have too obvious loopholes.

Yan Fei was confused, and Shen Xin got up and came to the workbench and took a copy of "ComicFuture" by the table.

Yan Fei took over "ComicFuture" and found it to be the 23rd issue.

"I remember that "DN" serialized the ...th episode 49 in this issue of the magazine?" Yan Fei curious.

"Yes. It's the word'potted'." Shen Xin stretched his bones. "Haisha set out Huo Kou's words, but her action was decided by her alone and she didn't discuss it with Yue, It is inevitable that there will be some violations. With L's intelligence, it may be possible to see clues."

Although Shen Xin said so, the big thrush did not show too obvious loopholes when creating this plot. Therefore, Shen Xin can only find some plots that may appear flawed.

"I remember that the reader was complaining about Haisha at the time and thought she had done more." Yan Fei turned to "DN" and after reading it again, although she still felt that Haisha was not doing this properly, she did not find any flaws for a while.

"Haisha's attitude." Shen Xin expressed her opinion. "After she submitted the recording to the investigation team, she was sure that Huo Kou was Kira."

"This is what Huo Kou said personally..."

"But it doesn't prove that Huo Kou is Kira. Even if there is a recording, he can still deny it. He also said that Kira's actions can be suspended, but except for the three people who betrayed the eight-member conference, there are still four people who may be Kira. Pull. Even if Yue and Nanchuan are on the phone,

"And next, the series of actions taken by L and the investigation team on Huo Kou were all based on the recording. She knew that Huo Kou was Kira, but the reason - she met Rem - couldn't say."

"This is also true."

"L, after seeing Rem, push it forward, would you think of a possibility, the reason why Haisha is so determined that Huo Kou is Kira, because she has also seen Rem... No, Haisha is going out. After that, DN was used, so L might think that Haisha and Rem had met, right?" Shen Xin looked nervously at Yan Fei and Wang Wenhong.

This logic must be approved by others.

Yan Fei nodded again and again.

"No problem, in the second volume, L installed cameras and bugs in Yue's home, also because of speculation. If he can think of this possibility, he will indeed supervise Haisha again. However, there is a logical loophole. ......The sea sand uses DN in the residence...... The courage is a bit too big, which is not in line with common sense, and it is clear that L will release the sea sand."

Shen Xin nodded, "This is also a logical issue."

In the comics, Yue and Haisha deliberately told Haisha when they were chatting privately, "Don't write your name on DN's paper at home."

In order to speed up the progress of the film, this part of the details is missing, otherwise it will take a long time to collect evidence that sea sand is Kira.The length of the movie is limited, and editing can only simplify the details.

But Shen Xin is now a cartoonist, he can't simplify like this.

Thinking of this, Shen Xin sighed in his heart, and he remembered the situation when he wrote the online novel.

In many cases, readers feel that the characters are brainless and have no IQ, but they only need to play supporting roles to reduce intelligence and reduce the logic of the work, which will greatly reduce the difficulty of creation.

In the case of serialization every day, the author wants to ensure that the IQ of each character is online, which is also helpless.

"This can also be explained, as long as the transfer or other people are away from home and monitor the sea sand. As long as L can find out that sea sand uses DN, everything will be OK."

"Don't you all know the logic loopholes in this part? Just modify it."

Yan Fei became more puzzled after listening to Shen Xin.

"No, there is one of the biggest logic holes that you didn't find." Shen Xin also opened a pot of coffee and took a sip. "Rem can see the lifespan of people. After she saw Haisha redeeming the eye of death again. , Life is reduced. Similarly, she can also know that L's life is reduced. If she thinks that L may have written his name on DN, then she should know that even if she uses DN, L will not die immediately, Still can't save the life of Haisha, so..."

Shen Xin took a deep breath.

"Why did Rem ask for Yue Hedu's name and write it on DN? Rem can only kill Du, but not L." 8) More exciting novels, welcome to visit everyone's academy