My Cartoonist Strategy
Chapter 852 Not Interested
Kong Xian opened "The Gate of Destiny Stone", the first thing he saw was a young man in a white coat, making a phone call, and behind him was a building.
A large instrument smashed into the top floor of this building.
The color of the color is so heavy that the background is somewhat blurred, which makes Kong Xian feel a depression in his heart.But whether it is the composition of color pages, or the drawing of characters and scenery, they are all in place, and the color also highlights the tone of the entire novel-deep.
Sure enough, at the beginning of the first chapter, there are many unique places.
After Gang Lun witnessed the death of Hong Liqi, he saw Hong Liqi again. It should prove that he had crossed, but he did not know, because he crossed to the "parallel world".
There are quite a few essays in the light novels, but most of them are accidents in the protagonist and they traversed to another world, while Gang Lun returned to the parallel world because of a text message.
However, it is better to say that it is a parallel world, because Gang Lun's crossing has changed the things around him.
The angle of the story is good, this writing has never appeared, but the essence of this novel is still through.
This was Kong Xian's first thought in his mind after seeing Gang Lun sent a text message to A Zhi, but the surroundings had changed.
Afterwards, the author turned his head and Gang Lun returned to the laboratory to talk with Zhen Youli and A Zhi.
I have to say that another's drawing skills are really good. The illustrations in the text clearly draw the appearance and character of the three characters.
It's just that the story suddenly jumped from the death of Hong Liqi to everyday life.
"The Gate of Destiny Stone" has only been updated in the app for four chapters, telling Hong Li to live in an open class, to fight back against Gang Lun's doubts. Afterwards, Gang Lun encountered the "flashing acupressure division" Tong Mengyu...
Kong Xian took a breath and read the four chapters without any effort.
After confirming that it was the last page of The Gate of Destiny, Kong Xian's face showed regret.
"how about it?"
"Good. Although I'm not sure if others can understand it, the story is fluent and people have the urge to read... Other people don't know, but I am looking forward to the progress of the next story."
After turning the last page, Kong Xian saw the comment area of "The Gate of Destiny Stone" and noticed a post saying that there were follow-up plots, so he curiously clicked in.
"I also think it's okay, that is, the words are not simple enough. There are some online light novels with better literary style, scene description, and character description, which are better than it."
"Do you know why there is no large-scale introduction to this novel?" Kong Xian asked.
"why?"
"Not necessary. No matter how good the author's portrayal of the character is, can a color page be intuitive? No. If you don't believe it, you can find a novel without illustrations, read two or three chapters, and compare it with this novel. You It was Hong Liqi and Zhen Youli that came to mind. What can you do with pictures, why do you need words?"
"Eh?"
Zeng Yue wondered if he had heard it wrong, and a light novel editor even recommended illustration here.
"But should the novel focus more on writing?"
"I know, this man named another, if the novel is written by him, his writing is okay. There is some water. If you want to publish it, you must squeeze the water." Kong Xian explained while looking at just now. 'S post, "Many people pay too much attention to literary talents. In fact, the novel is more concerned about the author's penpower. Of course, many newcomers lack penpower, so it looks a bit naive."
"The pen power of this novel... is not enough?" Zeng Yue hesitated.
The comics also pay attention to the pen power, which is reflected in the dialogue.
Limited by the length of the dialogue, the cartoonist should try to use as few words as possible to express the character's words.
Cartoonists are not writers, they can only do as good as possible, but they cannot achieve the ultimate.
"It's not enough, it's okay. It's much better than the light novelists selected from the Internet. Pen force is more complicated,
"Some authors imagine various exciting pictures in their minds, but they fall on the paper, but they are as bland as water... Of course, "The Gate of Destiny Stone" is also bland, but except for the first chapter, it talks about daily life. Gang Lun and A Zhi are going to listen to the open class experience, so the novel looks plain, but when Hong Li is perched in the pool of blood, the reader will feel nervous again.
"At the same time, another will also mobilize the reader's emotions. Therefore, it seems to be very plain, but it can attract the readers. Many authors who have just entered the industry or even have been in the industry for a few years may not grasp it well."
"So powerful?" Zeng Yue heard Kong Xian say this, and put away the contempt for the novel.
"Another also has shortcomings, and it is also obvious, that is, "water". His pen power is put in this novel, which is enough, but not concise. If it is to be published, it is estimated that some content will be modified... another_online?"
Kong Xian said another Weibo name softly, picked up the phone on the coffee table, and found another Weibo based on this name.
"...Interesting light novelist...followers, 13,000...19 chapters?"
Seeing the latest Weibo, Kong Xian immediately became energetic.
"Chapter 19?"
"Huh? Has it been serialized to Chapter 19?" Zeng Yue curiously asked.
"You do not know?"
"I don't know, I didn't read the comment area." Zeng Yue picked up the pad and entered another Weibo name.
The top microblog is the novel in Chapter 19.
Kong Xian just nodded, but his eyes fell on the phone screen.
There are 15 chapters that she didn't read, which is not long, but after careful evaluation, she found that there are more than 200,000 words in these 15 chapters.
When a reader encounters a favorite novel, he never feels that the novel is too long.
More than two hundred thousand words, a lot to say, when Kong Xian began to read the remaining "The Gate of Destiny Stone", but felt that time passed quickly, and unconsciously, the sky had dimmed.
Zeng Yue yawned, saw the editors in the office are gone, and glanced at Kong Xian, who was reading the novel, with a helpless face-she would not return to her editorial department. What if there was something in the editorial department?
"Hello, Sister Kong, it's time to go." Zeng Yue reminded.
"Oh, I know." Kong Xian stood up, rubbed his eyes, glanced at the time, 20:22.
"It's so late?" Kong Xian was a little surprised.
"Yeah, everyone is gone..." Zeng Yueqian coughed, "How does the novel read?"
"Not bad, better than most of the light novels serialized on the Internet... The quality is still very high. But I don't know why, I always feel the atmosphere is a bit depressed, it is probably related to the illustration."
"illustration?"
"Well. There was a scary illustration just now, a picture of a bloody puppet..."
"Listening to you, it feels like a ghost story."
Zeng Yue turned off all the lights in the office, Kong Xian stood up, looked down at the novel, but people walked out of the light reading office.
Zeng Yue shook his head, and there was a trace of suspiciousness in his heart-really so beautiful?
When he turned off the last lamp, Kong Xian standing outside the door suddenly whispered, so that Zeng Yue was trembling with a whole body.
"what happened?"
"No... nothing." Kong Xian was red and red, supporting us.
On the elevator, Zeng Yue's eyes kept staring at Kong Xian. Her brows were closed and her expression was tense, so that Zeng Yue was also curious about what she saw.
Kong Xian took a sigh of relief until the elevator came to the first floor, as if coming out of the novel.
"What did you see? So fascinated." Zeng Yue was a little curious.
"Zhen Youli is dead." Kong Xian's tone was very plain.
"Eh? How did you die?"
"It's complicated to say. Gang Lun used the time machine to go back to the past, but no matter what he did, there was no way to save Zhen Youli..." Kong Xian sighed. "If I'm right, the previous 17 chapters It's all foreshadowing, and the story was really not exciting until Chapter 18. I left a private message to another, hoping to publish this novel..."
"What did he say?" Zeng Yue rarely saw Kong Xian caring about a novel so curiously.
"No. But for him, this should also be a good opportunity? After all, not all novels have a chance to be published." Kong Xian laughed.
She is still very confident about this.
If it is not for publication, the other party does not need to serialize.
Just then, Kong Xian's cell phone rang.
She quickly picked up the phone, raised her eyebrows, and smiled: "With...he responded."
Zeng Yue smashed his mouth, and said that Kong Xian had good luck, and he turned to a book, which was of high quality.
But soon, he realized that Kong Xian's expression was not right, like a little angry or lost.
Has something changed?
"What's wrong?" Zeng Yue asked quickly.
Kong Xian bit his lip and took a deep breath, as if he was bullied, with a little anger in his words, "He said, not interested."
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