My Cartoonist Strategy

"Is it?" Shen Xin heard Yan Fei's words without showing joy, and pointed to another copy. "Sister Yan, there is another copy."

Yan Fei heard the words, put away her smile, and turned her gaze to another.

The title of the book is "Basketball Boy", which is about 60 pages long, but the tension of the story is far less than the first one.

The main thing is that a basketball specialty student who is about to graduate from junior high school. When he went to various high schools to step on points and chose a suitable high school, he accidentally met a man in a wheelchair and playing basketball on the court in an open-air basketball court.

The two men had a comparison test, but Chang Shengsheng found out that he was not an opponent of wheelchair youth.

Unwilling to lose, he left, not long after, he found a wheelchair and exchanged the wheelchair with the wheelchair youth, and ended in failure again.

In the end, he lost the competition and wanted to ask the origin of the youth. The youth said that he was originally a member of the provincial team. Later, he accidentally fell and broke his leg, but he still likes to play basketball. School, serving as a basketball teacher.

After hearing the words, he finally made up his mind and chose to apply for this school...

Yan Fei looked at the cartoon, frowning.

The two short stories are both basketball comics, but the content they represent is completely different.

The first article is a normal game. It occurs at the last moment of a key game. The protagonist of the lore opponent becomes a heroic character. This is also the most common routine of Wang Dao comics. At the same time, the fierce confrontation that sports comics should embody. In this article, got performance.

The second chapter is closer to the lives of ordinary people. Since anyone may encounter such a thing, the reader's sense of substitution is also stronger.

In addition, the focus of the two articles is different. The first article pursues "higher, faster, stronger", the second article is blood and sweat, and the character of wheelchair young people who are unyielding for hobbies.

The first article tells the basketball from a higher dimension, and the second article tells the reader that the basketball that ordinary people are familiar with is like this. Everyone does not have superb skills but has a full love for basketball.

In Yan Fei's view, these two comics have their own advantages and disadvantages. If possible, she wants both. It is estimated that Shen Xin's painter can show the advantages of the two comics.

It's just that it's impossible for Shen Xin to draw two short stories-60 pages per story, 120 pages per story.

Everyone has worked hard for more than a month, but the rewards are limited, and the gains are not worth the gains.

Based on this, one must choose one from the other.

Thinking again and again, Yan Fei rubbed her hands and looked up at Shen Xin.

"You can only choose one of two."

"Yes. Even if you choose one of the two, the workload is not small." Shen Xin said.

"If so..." Yan Fei hesitated for more than ten seconds before saying, "I choose the second one."

Xi Muhan was reading the second one, and when he heard Yan Fei's words, he raised his head and curiously said: "Sister Yan, I think the first chapter is also very good."

"The first article is good, but its advantages and disadvantages are outstanding." Yan Fei sighed.

"Huh?" Xi Muhan was stunned, somewhat puzzled.

"The first short story about the most intense and exciting part of a game, the look of reporters and spectators, the movements and language of the players, portrayed the tense atmosphere in the story. As soon as I showed it, I just watched it, and it was blood boiling, if the finished product came out, it would be more exciting and exciting.

"However, in a 60-page page, about 10 athletes, coaches, reporters, and audiences from both sides...too many characters were spoken, and the characteristics of these characters were not shaped. To tell the truth, I think If you want to attract readers to the story, the best way is to have a long foreshadowing before this short story. If it is part of the long story, then it is completely ok, or even the finishing touch. As for the short story... I’m not quite sure it’s a complete story, and it’s more appropriate to say it’s part of the story."

Yan Fei looked at Shen Xin nervously.

Shen Xin nodded. This part is the climax of the story and the most exciting part of a game, but as Yan Fei said, this is a plot of the story, not a complete plot.

The purpose of his drawing is to let other magazines know the selling point of the lower works and it is easier to negotiate, and that's all.

"Next article." Shen Xin said.

"The advantage of the second article is that it has a strong sense of substitution. Many people have experienced playing games on the court, and it is easy to resonate with readers. The only difference from other comics is that there is an extra wheelchair youth. It raises the theme of the work. The disadvantage is that the plot is too plain, allowing people to see the end of the story at a glance. Perhaps because of space considerations, the wheelchair youth in the work is self-introduction, I think this is the weakest way to express it . Rather than telling yourself, let others discover."

Yan Fei finished speaking in one breath, and then remembered that he was equivalent to refuting Shen Xin's two short stories, but strictly speaking, these two are not as unbearable as they said, and they are also very exciting.

If you send any of them directly to the magazine, it will definitely be serialized, and, thanks to Shen Xin’s previous popularity, you can also get a high popularity.

However, these two are indeed lacking, which is also true.

Shen Xin tapped on the table, staring at the second copy in Yan Fei's hand.

In fact, this story is an excerpt from another basketball comic "real" by Inoue Inoue, which is an inspirational cartoon about wheelchair basketball.

He thought of "real" because he remembered Yang, a young man who also loves basketball but can only sit in a wheelchair.

Yan Fei saw that Shen Xin was silent, thinking that Shen Xin was hesitant. After a long time, she still felt that she should say two more words: "Mr. Shen, I know you are very popular in China now, even in the next work. It’s just general quality, and it’s still selling well. Of course, these two are also good, but as your editor, I still hope that you pay more attention to some details. Is there still a lot of people behind?”

"Ah?" Shen Xin looked up at Yan Fei who was standing in front of him, "I am thinking about the revision..."

"Cough...sorry." Yan Fei coughed quickly, slightly embarrassed.

"You are right, the first part, the structure is a bit bloated. After all, there are too many characters involved, and the plot is difficult to perfect. Therefore, I decided to use the second part as a model and readjust the structure of the story. It takes about two days. Time can be completed." Shen Xin made an "OK" gesture towards Yan Fei, "Since it has to be done, it must be the best."

"Really?" Yan Fei rejoiced.

Shen Xin's decision was completely beyond her expectations.

"Of course... Xiaohan, find out the photos we took when we were traveling. I will select the scene there, and the photos we used when we met with Yang will also be used." Shen Xin looked at Xi Muhan.

"Ok."

Xi Muhan returned to his desk, opened the cloud disk, and was looking for photos. Wang Wenhong walked into the studio feebly. Behind him, he followed a woman.

Wang Wenhong tapped on the glass door twice, and the three people in the house moved their eyes to the glass door.

When Yan Fei saw the woman who followed Wang Wenhong, she was stunned for a while, and then she smiled, "Xiao Li, are you here?"

Shen Xin also recognized the woman in front of her, which was Yan Fei’s colleague in New World, Wu Xiaoli.

"Sister Yan, you are going to get married. Of course I will come to see you." Wu Xiaoli opened her arms and hugged Yan Fei together.