My Cartoonist Strategy

Chapter 109 Substitution

After hearing the suggestion of Shen Xin, Ji Yinxuan also began to consider the issue of version.

In May of next year, there will be a game show in China. "The Gate of Destiny Stone" is definitely going to be exhibited. Even though magi won the production right of "The Gate of Destiny Stone", it is a new company after all, and there are very few works that can be obtained. Very few, much less likely to be like some big companies-such as Zhenyu, whose company name is advertising-are well known by players and become the focus, so it is likely to be left out in the early stages.

Fortunately, the novels and comics of "Gate of Destiny" have already been promoted, and this game has accumulated a certain amount of popularity, which is an advantage.Other language versions are trying to expand the sales of the game. However, for games like "The Gate of Destiny Stone", the text is also relatively large, and the translation cost will not be too low, and it is also time-consuming.

But if it can really increase sales, this price is obviously worth it.

However, before that, magi still has to finish the game of "Gate of Destiny".

Xi Muhan was also very busy in the past month. After she decided to take apart a comic, she was not idle.

At the beginning of the creation of a work, we must have a concept, otherwise, like the water without a source, the wood without a root, the author feels that there is no focus when creating, and the reader will also feel scattered.

If it is a daily work, the story structure is not tight, and the problem will not be too big, but for a evil comic, the loose story is a taboo-if you want to compete with other royal comics, evil comics must always attract readers.

After deciding to extend the plot of the new work based on the first remarks, Xi Muhan also put a lot of effort into writing a good script.

When it comes to evil comics, a comic is "DN", but Shen Xin did not let her watch it, nor did she ask her to make a reference, so as not to mess up her thinking, just let her watch some movies or documentaries, at most watch Suspense novels.

In fact, like "DN", "Sincerely as God said", or "The Promised Fantasy Island" with the comic book color, there is a clear difference between this kind of comics and detective comics or novels .

For example, like "Jin Tianyi Youth Event Book", its difficulty lies in how to design the crime. If you want to use the "secret room killing" bridge section, how to create a new idea, and how to establish the murderer's absence proof. These are creations. Important considerations.

That is to say, the author is "designing" the story, and the most typical case is the "Hexagon Village Incident", which was very clever.

Going back to the common evil comics, there are also design bridges, but the difference from the detective comics is that the rules or the bridges will be told to the reader in advance.For example, "DN", from the first words, the reader knows the existence of DN; for example, "Gambling Apocalypse", various game rules, such as "rock, scissors, cloth", such as E card games, the rules will tell the reader in advance Therefore, the focus of the comics is not to design bridges, but to "fight" with rules, but more with "intellectual struggle" with different people, with more emphasis on logic.

Of course, this situation is not 100%, like "The Gate of Destiny Stone", the result of the event tells you-the death of truth, and then the protagonist will work with the reader to demolish the whole mystery.

The best way to go back to "Girls Going Through Parallel Worlds" is to resemble "Gate of Destiny Stone", to dismantle the mystery of the whole story. Unlike "Gate of Destiny Stone", the biggest advantage of "Girls Going Through Destiny" Fast and easier to attract readers. The disadvantage is that it is because of the fast entry of the topic, which leads to insufficient paving of the story. Therefore, Xi Muhan should increase this type of setting in the subsequent plot.

In addition, in Shen Xin's view, "The Gate of Destiny Stone" has a biggest difference compared with "Crossing the Girl". Ryutaro Okabe can repeatedly traverse to correct the truly reasonable world line. re: Life in a different world from scratch", "Happy Days" and other works, also through multiple crossing/reversing to advance the event, but "traversing girls" does not have so many crossings.

To advance the plot, the story must produce contradictions, but on the premise that they cannot be traversed repeatedly, how to create contradictions has become a focus, which is where Shen Xin pays most attention.

After washing, the two were ready to take a break. Before turning off the light, Shen Xin also raised this issue.

Xi Muhan dried his hair with a hair dryer, looked back at Shen Xin, and there was pride on his face, "Of course there is a contradiction. Brother, do you know the butterfly effect?"

"Well." Shen Xin nodded.

The so-called butterfly effect is a small thing that may cause a huge chain reaction.

"After the heroine traversed, it actually had an impact on the parallel world. In addition to the death of classmate Wang He, a series of events related to Wang He will change, which conflicts with the heroine's memory. This conflict points to the death of Wang He, thus advancing the plot."

"The difference between the two worlds?" Shen Xin was stunned. This was a good starting point. "But there is a problem of substitution. Readers don't know what changes Wang He's leaving will bring to this world."

"I think this way, the heroine travels forward for a week or two. Then, through these two weeks, whether there is a difference between Wang He and find a contradiction. On the one hand, the heroine finds the reason for Wang He's death, on the other hand Find a way to cross the previous world." Xi Muhan apparently also considered this issue.

Shen Xin rubbed his chin and frowned, "This way the rhythm will be slow, and the sense of substitution may be poor."

"Ok?"

"Did you not find it? Your story structure is actually similar to "The Gate of Destiny Stone", you have to use the previous plot to replace it. The difference is that "Crossing Girl" is faster than "Stone Gate", "Stone Gate" Because of the need to make a fortune, the story turns to 1/2 when the story progresses, and because there are a lot of bedding in the front, the reader will have a sense of substitution when he sees the subsequent plot. The question is too fast, the reader does not know what happened in the past week or two. When you mention a contradiction, the reader will be at a loss." Shen Xin worried.

Xi Muhan frowned, roughly recalling the entire plot in his mind, and also realizing that if he really wanted to advance this way, there would indeed be a problem of substitution.

Readers cannot be resonated, the impact on readers will be greatly reduced.

"What should I do?" Xi Muhan scratched his head, suddenly feeling a little irritable in his heart.

If her goal is just serialization, the current brain hole should be enough, but her goal is obviously more than that.

Shen Xin sighed. If he wants to find a solution in a short time, it seems...it is not too easy.

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