My sister can't be Ayase Little Angel

You can search "My sister can't be Ayase Little Angel Search Novel (www.soxscc.com)" in Baidu to find the latest chapter!Ayase and Ryunosuke finished pulling up the stray weeds in the courtyard. It was already morning, and the sun was already hanging in the air.

Although I didn't slept long last night, although he pulled up the grass all morning, Ryunosuke is not sleepy at all.

He was sitting on a chair by the computer desk in the room, with a candy in his mouth.

What are you doing now?

Just give some advice to the black cat novel and say a few thoughts.

In fact, when he read it yesterday, he was already revising it.It's just minor issues like typos and word order.

As for the more advanced ones, for example, it would be better to modify the plot, and how to make the character's character more distinctive.

There are also some more mysterious things, such as the sense of rhythm, the control of the plot, the ability to mobilize readers’ emotions,...

He didn't comment on all of these, not because he wanted to hide, but because they had to read the full text to comment.

Otherwise, it's almost the same as nonsense. It is normal operation to comment after reading it.

This is what we need to do now, Long Zhisuke deliberated his words and tried his best to tactfully advise the black cat.

First praise, then talk about the shortcomings, and then praise again.

This "sandwich" method was learned by Ryunosuke from the Internet, but I don't know if it is necessary.

But he believed that the black cat would understand his intentions, because she was a smart person.

Even if the black cat sees through her tricks, she will definitely accept feasible opinions seriously and regard his methods as a kind of care for her.

Therefore, it is better to see through it, and to make a girl invisible.

Comments are not at the end of the full text, but there are places for comments in the full text.

Hei Mao’s novels are at least 100,000 words or more, so this matter is actually not simple.

He probably marked the problematic areas during the first reading. This time he just found these areas and explained them in detail.

Delete some of the suggestions written by the first impression, because he read it wrong.

Some places praise it, because it is really good.

Some are supplementary explanations, suggesting the second possibility.

some……

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At noon, Ayase asked him to have a meal, and as soon as he finished eating, he came back to continue editing the black cat's novel.

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This is not the same as writing a novel by myself.

It will give people a sense of boredom, irritability, and a little sleepy.

Thinking about it this way, editing is actually quite a bit difficult.

So.

He changed halfway to a little doze, and he was going to go to bed for a while and do the rest in the afternoon.

Of course, it may have just been full, a little sleepy, coupled with the extremely hot weather, coupled with not sleeping well last night.

In short, Ryunosuke went to bed and pulled the quilt onto his stomach, leaving no other places covered.

He fell asleep quickly.

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The sun circles from east to west, and the temperature is getting higher and higher.

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Ryunosuke used to think that twelve o'clock was the hottest, but later learned that the hottest time of the summer day is one or two in the afternoon.

After one o'clock in the afternoon, the cicada screamed louder.

Rao is Ryunosuke who only covers his stomach and feels too hot.

Long Zhisuke opened his sleeping eyes and touched his head, making him sweat a little.

He lifted the quilt and let out a long breath.

Hearing the noisy cicadas, he lay on the bed for a while before sitting up and regaining consciousness.

Turned over and got out of bed, feeling a little wet on the back, not very cool.

Looking at the fan in the room, Ryunosuke sighed, "It seems that the time has come to use it."

Turn to a low wind speed without blowing at people.

He and Ayase’s room does not have air conditioning, and the whole house is heated in winter, so air conditioning is not needed.

In summer, there is an air conditioner in the living room and there is only an electric fan in the room.

It's not that you can't afford to install air conditioners, but for health reasons.

Sweating slightly in summer is good for your health, if you have air conditioning.Haha Literature Network www.hahawx.net

It's the same all the year round, then you get the air conditioner.

After cooling off for a while, Ryunosuke stood up again and read the novel by Black Cat.

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In the afternoon he hurriedly wrote everything he wanted to say, and then he checked the suggestions he had written two or three times.

an examination?Of course it needs to be checked.

It would be embarrassing if you correct a typo for others, but the advice you sent in the past is a typo.

After making a few changes, I clicked send directly.

Then Ryunosuke sitting in front of the window happily imagined how the black cat would react.

I don't know how the black cat feels?Do you think I read his novel very seriously?Very moved.

Then the big students have a good impression and become a confidant, and walk to the palace of marriage.

He closed his eyes and leaned back on the chair, and put his legs on the table casually.

Feeling the slight cool breeze blown by the fan, he calmed down and heard various sounds.

For example, the sound of fans, the sound of clocks moving, and the calls of various insects outside, the most noticeable is the cicadas.

Ryunosuke carefully distinguished the sounds of all things, and slowly immersed in the sounds of all things.

The fatigue in my heart also slowly disappeared, and after a while, Ryunosuke was awakened by the big movement outside.

Ryunosuke opened his eyes and recalled the feeling just now. Is this the feeling that everything is one with me?

In the master secret book, this is a way to quickly restore mental power.

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After returning to God, Ryuzhijie was blowing a fan while thinking about what to do in the afternoon.

However, Ryunosuke fell into a boring circle for a while and didn't know what to do.

This is very bad. If it's summer vacation, wouldn't it be suffocating?

No friends and no games to play, is this actually the same as going to jail?This is a little bit wider in the scope of activities.

No wonder someone who traveled to ancient times wanted to fight the world, otherwise it would be really painful.

Think about the ancients, when it gets dark at six or seven o'clock, they have to go home to sleep.Slowly long night, really difficult.

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It’s impossible to watch anime. I borrow Ayase’s money and keep dating a black cat.

You need money to ride a car, to order a meal in a maid restaurant, and to go shopping with black cats and others for money.

And buying an iced drink or ice cream in summer is normal, right?It also costs money.

Therefore, this money cannot be spent casually.

How about that?Ryunosuke's eyes lit up on the chair.

He nodded, thinking it was a good trick.

Turn off the fan and go downstairs to get out

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It's actually a walk in the sun.

After four o'clock in the afternoon, the heat gradually subsided, which is a good time to bask in the sun.

Ryunosuke decided to go out for a walk, it's useless to bask in the sun through the glass.

I heard that because the glass blocks ultraviolet rays, it must be outdoors.

You can not bask in the sun when the weather is hottest.

It is best to choose morning or afternoon, the best is after the hottest energy of the sun.

Now is the best time.

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Going downstairs and looking at Ayase in a cool summer outfit, Ryunosuke's eyes were a little lingering.

For a while, I didn't want to leave, but watched Ayase there and read the book seriously.

I want to come here to rub the air conditioner in the living room.

Disturbance was not good at this time, Long Zhisuke thought for a while, and he didn't like being disturbed by others when he was reading seriously.

Ryunosuke secretly took out his mobile phone and took a picture of Ayase, but unfortunately, he forgot that there was sound when taking pictures here.

Ayase raised his head and glanced, Ryunosuke secretly said that he was not good, but he snapped another shot in his hand, and he ran away immediately after sticking out his tongue.

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Just like the moment when the bottle cap was unscrewed, soda pouring out, Ayase's summer clothes ignited all the passion of Ryunosuke.

Summer is awesome.Ryunosuke walked on the street with vigor.