My sister can't be Ayase Little Angel

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"Now, Yukoshita," Ryunosuke looked at the people in training with his arms, "how do you think I handled it?"

Xuexia, wearing a green tennis training suit, also looked at everyone:

"If you let me praise to satisfy your vanity, maybe you can."

"Ah, you said that, even if you praise me, I won't be happy." Ryunosuke turned his head and smiled and said to Xuexia.

Xuexia sighed slightly:

"Well, although your behavior is unusual, you have been extremely restrained as a dude.

As a result, I handled the matter very well, there were no sequelae, and I did a good job."

Long Zhisuke looked at Xuexia and thought for a moment: "I really can't tell whether you are mocking or complimenting.

But forget it, I will take it as a compliment."

Xuexia's eyes flashed, and he said nothing.

...

After watching it for a while, Ryunosuke said again: "Go and teach Totsuka-san to play tennis.

Let me thank Chai Muzao for his contribution to the activities of our ministry."

Yukoshita nodded and then set off to walk forward, calling Totsuka Saika to correct a small problem.

Ryunosuke walked to the chaimu seat where he was practicing swinging against the air.

Chai Muzuo stopped when he saw Long Zhisuke coming over.

He wanted to talk to Long Zhisuke, but when he saw that Long Zhisuke and Xuexia were talking, he didn't look for it.

——

After Long Zhisuke walked in front of Chai Muzao, he said with a smile:

"It's also good to play tennis. When you get better, your brain will be quicker."

Chai Muzuo hesitated and waved his racket again: "Master is right."

Eh?The master choked at what Long Zhisuke wanted to say.

"...Um, how is your novel writing recently?" Ryunosuke cleverly skipped the topic of master.

"Oh, it has been revised." Chai Muzuo lifted his spirits upon hearing this.

He stopped swinging and took out a stack of drafts printed on A4 paper from the big pocket of the brown trench coat.

Open the folded draft, fold the wrinkled corners, and then hand it to Ryunosuke with both hands.

Seeing that Chai Muzuo was taking such a serious matter, Long Zhisuke couldn't help being more serious, and took the draft with both hands.

People who work hard are worthy of respect, because many people don't work hard.

Even if it fails, the effort itself will not lose the value of being affirmed.

Long Zhisuke looked down at the headline: "It's still "Juggernaut Academy"~"

Chai Muzuo nodded: "Yes, I took a major overhaul based on the revision opinions of Master and Xuexia."

Long Zhisuke nodded, and it takes courage to insist on reading the 100,000 characters criticized for nothing from the beginning.

However, he raised his head and said, "Chai Muzuo, don't call me master.

I am also just a third-rate writer, and I can give you a little empirical advice at most. Master, I can't afford it."

Chai Muzuo smiled: "To be honest, your previous work, Master, was really bad.

But the book "Let's Fall in Love with the Second Disease" is very good, just from the eyes of an old bookworm."

Long Zhisuke was a little surprised. How did Chai Muzuo know his novel: "How did you know it?"

"Humph," Chai Muzuo pushed a black-rimmed glasses, and said calmly.

"I just watched all the winners of Lightning Strike Library's Light Novel Awards in the past ten years.

Master, you did not win the prize because you were not enough age, but you also made your debut through promotion."

Long Zhisuke was even more surprised: "You really did it hard.

It’s just that I still don’t dare to be your master. Let’s talk about it as friends, right?"

Chai Muzuo paused for a while, knowing that it would be annoying to fight again and again, so he had to give up regretfully:

"Well, I'm not too difficult for others, so please give me more advice, classmate Xinyuan."

"Eumm... call me Long Nosuke, I'm used to people calling me by name directly."

Chai Muzuo nodded, "Well, I didn't expect Shi...Long Zhisuke, you are also a supporter of new customs."

Just as Long Zhisuke lowered his head to read, he raised his head again: "What new custom?"

"Aren't we all called first name + position status? Only when you are close, you can call your surname directly, and you can call your name if you are very close.

The new custom is to jump out of the local customs, like most people in the country, directly called the name."

After listening to Chai Muzuo's explanation, Ryuzhisuke nodded clearly: "I have a lot to learn."

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"Long Zhisuke, you are really humble." Chai Muzuo delivered a flattery in time.

Hearing this, Long Zhijie shook his head with a smile, and looked at Chai Muzuo's work again.

Still "Juggernaut Academy", in the plot, the front part has not changed much, and the back part has not been finished.

But all the typos were corrected.

The sick sentences have also been revised, although a few inappropriate places can be found after careful reading.

The sentences are also much smoother and more natural. Although they are simple and straightforward, without rhetoric like flowers, they are fine.

Even the specific second language discourse has been simplified a lot, and some unique names are also annotated at the bottom of the draft.

If you play at this level, let's not say whether the story looks good or not, at least you have the qualification to submit your paper to the competition.

However, Ryunosuke looked up and said, "Well, why is the name of the protagonist Yoshiki Chaimuzuo?"

When Chai Muzuo heard this, his face turned red, and then pretended to smile boldly with his hips akimbo:

"Hahaha, I just wrote a memoir of the adventures I experienced in my previous life, and the name should naturally be recorded truthfully."

Long Zhijie couldn't help laughing and cursing in his heart: [It's really not ashamed.

He smiled and looked down.

Next, there are some new plots, and the writing... is also pretty good, there are turning points, and there are no typos.

Long Zhisuke nodded and praised:

"The new plot has not been modified by me and Xuexia, and you have written it very well."

"Haha" Chai Muza laughed aloud twice again, which caused Ayaka Totsuka who was practicing there to watch for a while.

"Before, it was just because the memories of the previous life were too mottled, so the records were a bit messy, so I can sort them out a bit."

When Long Zhisuke heard the words of previous life, his eyes moved a little:

[How can a person's writing style improve in a few days?

It's like mathematics, you can improve your grades in a sudden learning, but you can't accumulate Chinese.

Could it be that Chai Muzuo was crossed?

Ryunosuke stared at Chai Muzuo's face and looked carefully: [Sure enough, it's suspicious.

The behavior of scolding Yeshan and Youzi did not resemble Chaimuzuo.

wumm...but he didn't dare to look at them with his back turned, and he had his style.

Hiss... Could it be that he was affected by the original Chai Muzuo?

Or……

Seeing Ryunosuke kept staring at him, Chai Muzuo thought Ryunosuke didn't believe it.

He patted his chest and believed:

"Don't underestimate me, I also passed the entrance examination to enter the best public high school in Chiba. I still have some basic knowledge in Chinese."

Ryunosuke slowly nodded his head, so it can be explained, but:

"............You will not be a fake firewood seat, are you?"

Chai Muzuo was puzzled at first, and then he said: "Why?"

Long Zhisuke tentatively saw that his pupils had not shrunk, and he was convinced.

Continue to observe later.

Seeing Long Zhisuke, Chai Muzuo coughed slightly: "Okay, I'll be honest.

The previous one was actually written by myself, and sometimes the pen tip can’t keep up with the plot that emerges in my mind.

That's why there are so many low-level errors."

Said Chai Muzuo nodded: "Well, this time is the version for others to see."

"Okay, I understand." Ryunosuke groaned for a while without further questioning.

Next, Long Zhisuke thought for a while, if the basic skills are okay, then the point is to watch the plot.

But most of the plot is the same, only a few new plots.

So can it be seen quickly, the one with ten lines at a glance?

Ryunosuke thinks this is fine, but...

He looked up in anticipation and approval?Looking at his wood seat:

"Well, since there is nothing wrong with the text, and the plot is probably the same, I will watch it quickly?"

Chai Muzuo thought about it for a moment, and nodded if he felt that there was nothing wrong.

Only then did Ryunosuke confidently display his reading speed beyond ordinary people. Although there is no six times, there are still three or four times.

Chai Muzuo looked at the drafts that were constantly being turned over, and gradually had some doubts in his heart. Did Ryunosuke really see it clearly?Are you just playing me?

But looking at Ryunosuke's eyes without blinking, his face couldn't help showing seriousness.

He had no doubts for a moment, lowered his head and thought with shame:

[I'm really a bastard, Ryunosuke is so serious, I actually suspect that I don't have enough friends.