My younger siblings are so cute

Black Cat has always been obsessed with publishing her own novels, or in other words, she has never given up her dream of becoming a debut novelist.It's just that after a long talk with the editor a long time ago, she recognized herself clearly, so she abandoned the idea of ​​continuing to write doujin and started writing a new novel.

"Well... the outline has been thought out a long time ago, and now the first volume is almost written, and it can be revised."

Hei Mao Ting Xiangtai mentioned this problem, and pushed the manuscript on the table over, indicating that he could pick it up and read it.

After flipping through the outline, Shota found that the content of this novel can actually be summarized in one sentence.Second disease saves the world.

"However, although there are still many settings, it is easier to understand than last time."

"That must be, Lord Fallen Angel Black Cat wrote this novel on the basis that we can all understand it."

Tushou suddenly broke into the conversation between the two, expressing his compliments to the black cat in his words.

"Heh, it turns out that the so-called can provide help is this."

Xiangta smiled, but saw the black cat shook his head, and said, "There are many light-hearted stories in the story, including some of them in everyday life."

After listening to the black cat's explanation, Shota focused on the book again. The protagonist is a second radio girl who looks a little like the black cat. Of course, she would not admit it.Then one day, I found that the world in my fantasy and the real world gradually overlapped.But she did not have the powerful abilities that she had imagined. On the contrary, a male teacher she usually spurned suddenly turned into a knight, fighting against other people to protect her...

"..."

Shota raised his head and glanced at the black cat. How could this teacher have a sense of sight.Cooking is versatile, fighting superb...

"Don't get me wrong."

Seeing Shota's eyes, the black cat blushed and turned his face away, saying, "It's just that this kind of housekeeper is very popular nowadays, and it's just a male lead like a knight."

"Oh oh."

Shota nodded. To tell the truth, the hero in the book left those two points behind. He was almost a man of extreme soil, who was ordinary in everything. Not only did Shota think of Kyosuke.

In fact, he didn't notice that as long as Kyosuke added the attributes of superb combat effectiveness and superb cooking skills, it would be a soft expression version of Shota.

The knight who stubbornly called the female lord the king, and the female lord who felt that the male teacher was scumbags, the two anxiously formed a group of partners in the constant battle. There are many places in the book that Sho is familiar with, such as self-proclaimed The enemy of the owner of the Evil King’s True Eye, the dark flame envoy, and the user of the Nordic Thunder Hammer...

It’s just that Shota originally thought that the book was aimed at women, but after reading it for a while, he discovered that his main audience was actually men, because he found that apart from the male teacher, there was nothing about women. The Lord has too many male characters, but there are many female characters around the male teacher.And the portrayal is good, for example, the other king opposite the heroine, golden glitter, Shota even saw the shadow of Tongno in her, she always wanted to subdue the heroine's first knight, and virginally against the heroine.

At the same time, there is also a dark king, who is also a female character. On the surface, he is kind and introverted. In fact, he is still a paranoid murderer. For some reason, he also likes the enviable male protagonist.

In short, the conflict in the whole novel lies in the struggle between the kings, and the heroine has the name of the king without the strength of the king.Fighting has always been the black cat's good at, whether it is the lines that burn to the scum, or the magic spell that is so cold that it is chilling, the black cat can master it very skillfully.The difference between this book and the previous novels written by Black Cat is that there are a lot of daily links that make people laugh or move.Shota could see that many of the inspirations in it came from the coffee shop, or from this small activity room.

I have to say that Shota was fascinated for a while.

"It deserves to be a good novel that even I can understand. At least I think I am more appetizing of it than Kirino's."

I don’t know how long it took, only Black Cat and Shota were left in the activity room. Shota closed the novel and said to Black Cat, “What’s the ending of the first volume?”

At the end of the first volume, the male protagonist is vaguely separated from the first female protagonist. The reason for everything is of course the golden king.

"Not ready yet."

The black cat shook his head and said to Shota, "What do you think? Is there anything that can be improved?"

"Well... I think there are some. But it's too late now."

Shota smiled and realized that the sun was already setting west, so he said to the black cat, "Let's talk while walking."

So, on the road, on the tram, and even in the sky, the black cat was discussing the issue of the novel with Shota.As Black Cat said that she wanted to participate in this month's submission, Shota also wanted to give her some help as soon as possible.

It may be because there is no reason, or it may be that I have seen the helpless look of the previous black cat novels when they have been criticized for nothing. Anyway, Shota kind of regarded this novel as his dream, and has been moving towards any method that can be improved.

"what……"

During the class, Shota couldn't help but yawned sleepily, which attracted the attention of the students. He spent most of the night studying the novels of Black Cat and gave his opinion from a male reader. .

"Okay, it's almost like that. That's all for today's class."

In the next week, in order to catch up with the deadline and confirm the final draft, Shota collected feedback from other people to Black Cat every day, hoping that she could perfect her novel.

"How about it, Kyosuke!"

"Well... how do you say it, although you can see the black cat's style in the battle scene, and there are some settings that I can't understand, but this time I didn't feel too annoying, just simply thought it was amazing. ."

After reading the entire manuscript, Kyosuke said to Shota, "However, how do I think the male lead and the old man are a bit like you."

"That's not the point. Am I like the kind of trembling M that whispers "king" to people?" Shota knocked Shimo Kyosuke on the head and asked, "Give me some advice."

"Oh oh."

Seeing his brother's seriousness, Kyosuke didn't interrupt, and began to talk about some possible problems in the book, while Shota carefully memorized every word Kyosuke said.

"Before, when Kirino was writing a novel, I never saw you so serious..."

"Kouhu, I didn't accompany Tong Na to collect materials at that time, but she wrote about women, so I can't give advice...nothing."

When mentioning Tongno, Shota sighed, then closed the notebook and said, "That's it, I'm going to bed first, and I'm exhausted these days."

"Oh~ rest early. Brother."

"good night."

At noon the next day, Black Cat and Shota were still sitting on the familiar bench. In order to save Black Cat's time, Shota prepared the lunch for her these days.

"Here you are, there is this all-purpose bento for replenishing energy and moving your head. I have deleted the opinion that Kyosuke said yesterday. I have deleted some things that only meet his delusions. In short, they are all small details. ."

Chapter One Hundred and Seventeen

"Thank you."

After the black cat thanked him, he accepted the manuscript handed by Shota.

Shota couldn't help but yawn, and the black cat beside him kept paying attention.

"It's okay, it was a bit late to sort out the information on the class last night." Shota quickly explained with a smile, but didn't pay attention. Her tears flowed from the yawn just now.

"Wipe it."

The black cat took out a handkerchief from his pocket and handed it to Shota.

"Thanks."

After wiping his eyes casually, Shota put away the handkerchief and said, "I will return it to you after washing it."

"up to you."

Black Cat carefully looked at the suggestions that Shota had summed up, and found that they were all small things, such as which sentences could look more handsome, and those lines could help readers better understand the character's personality.If you change it, it doesn't take long to change it.

"Is the deadline Sunday?"