Nightwatcher

Speaking that this story is recently, not, saying that the overall story of the third volume is now.

Originally in my thoughts, the third volume wrote the story of the teenager, the lack of the rivers and lakes, wrote the characters on the rivers and lakes, incidents, ideas, but reality tend to bother.

In order to write a good third volume, I read a lot of travel classes and animation, film and television works.

Frustrated discovery, travel type works, if it is placed in the web circle, the only ending is that Soil is not satisfied.

The reason is very simple, the travel class novels, the protagonist is constantly walking, keeping on the journey, which leads to two results:

One: The character cannot be deeply shaped, and it is a passerby.

Second: The reader has no sense of feeling and expectation. . .

Don't explain the first point, it is difficult to shape the characters, familiar with the place, and leave immediately.

The most deadly is the second point, the reader has no sense of feelings and expectations. As a reader, you may have not summed this phenomenon, but as the author's sense of the sense of the readers, it is also a matter of profound research.

Fixed map, plump characters, more expectation and feelings.

Bi-side, Xu Qi'an wants to sleep, sleeping the country and a woman, which is more expected? Xu Qi'an must be forced, in front of the capital of Beijing, in front of a group of rivers and lakes, which is more expected?

The predecessor's expectance is that the novels of the rode are paved, and the novels of the travel class, because it is too "ignorant", it is everywhere, so you can't afford this expectation.

Before the opening, I originally used the mode of the unit drama to write the rivers and lakes.

For example, with Jiu Dao Dragon Gas host, write their story, the protagonist participates by bystanders. But in this way, the existence of the protagonist is too low, and the coolness is not enough.

Cool points are not enough, it means can't!

Later I think, you can make up for a lot of small events, improve the story tension, those small incidents don't have to be useful, you can pass a village, I found a ghost mess.

When passing by a town, there is a hometown of the boss in bullying male.

These are the usual methods used to be used in the travel, the events and customs encountered on the main road, but there is not much to use for the main line.

In this way, the story is nothing to write, and it's nothing to write. I have never been a sense of feeling. Instead, I will feel the author in the water.

Until now, I didn't think of a better way to solve these problems.

If you have a heart, please ask, let's think about it, people who can teach me, there is not much, and then, I don't know.

For the entire December, my writing status is a focus.

I urgently want to find a stimulus, I want to improve the tension of the plot, so I have the plot of the Duo Tu Tower, but I wrote here, I found a question: The pad is not enough.

This pave is not said that the incident is too abrupt, but all the characters are still not full, the characters are not full, and there is no charm.

But the way the type of travel is like this.

Next, I will start with "conflict", "crisis", "upgrade" and sleeping people as the core, and launched the plot. Then, according to the effect, according to your feedback, determine the space on the upper half of the third volume.

The teenager is just the content of the third volume.

Just say it first, today's word is not code, I have been thinking about these issues.

Write this single chapter, the first is to make a complaint, spit the bitter water on the way. The second is to hope that if there is any good suggestion, you can mention it in this chapter.

Its mountain stone can attack jade, maybe your opinion will bring me inspiration.

I am eager to come with you some in-depth, soul collision. (Dog head)

Ok, eat, eat the code.