Rebirth Dad with Mangaka System

"A big move? About what?"

If the Orange Blossom Society is making big moves in terms of original paintings and music, I don’t worry about it.

"About the script!" Chen Tong's mood is a little difficult to calm down. "Just the Orange Flower Club has just released the demo version of the galgame they are going to participate in this time, and they have received unanimous praise. Their script is really amazing. ."

Script aspect!It might be a bit bad!

"Send me a link to the demo version." After Bai Yi finished speaking, he hung up the phone and immediately turned on the computer.

Opening the link sent to him by Chen Tong, Bai Yi clicked in.

The cover of the game is a boy and a girl. The girl is holding a black rag doll and wearing a white princess dress with a long hair and a shawl down. It looks very cute. Although the boy looks a little naive, it is also very handsome. He stood beside the girl, glancing at the girl with a hint of blush on his face.

Boys and girls have a common feature...that is...their hair color is silvery white...

In the cover image of the game, at the feet of boys and girls, the name of the game is written:

Fate of the sky!

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The demo version is free, so basically all players who like galgame games will download it for trial, and if they like it, they will order the official version.

And the more people who try it, the more stable the rating. If the score is 8 points, it means that the game is really excellent. After hundreds of thousands of people tried it, the score was actually even. Reached the most terrifying nine points!

Bai Yi opened the comment area and found that the comment area was also unanimously praised!

"Oh my god! The story is so exciting! The goddess is mine! The green plum bamboo horse is high! But I still choose the dome girl!"

"Miss Yiye is so beautiful! This kind of white fumei is my favorite thread! But I choose Qiongmei!"

"Sisters who hate sisters do not become domes, but no sisters who hate sisters are not sisters! Surely it is better to be sisters!"

"Don't say it! I'm going to persuade my mother to have a sister now!"

"Upstairs! After 15 years, please tell us your story..."

After turning over a few pages of comments, Bai Yi felt a little upset and decided to try it out for herself.

Because it is a demo version, it is still rough in terms of picture quality, and lacks voiceovers of voice actors, and there is no BGM. There are some minor flaws in the plot, but it is also a relatively complete plot.

Bai Yi itself is a master of galgame, plus some hints of the strategy that comes with the game, Bai Yi has attacked one sister after another.

The lines of Tianmumuying, Yiyuan Naixu, Nagisa Naha, Nogizaka Hata and others, although the plot is very exciting and has their own innovations, are not particularly special, and Baiyi’s feeling is also biased towards the general Excellent.

but!In the end, when Bai Yi attacked all the lines, the game finally opened the hidden line!Kasugano Dome!The protagonist's sister!Sister line!

this moment!Not to mention men!Even the female herself feels a little excited!

With excitement, Bai Yi played page by page very seriously... The first encounter between Yo and Dome... You were attracted by Dome's cuteness... A little bit of the two living together, Qiong is jealous when her brother and other girls are too close together...

At last!You and Qiong finally understood their own intentions...to the end!Bai Yi was stunned...the two people had an indescribable relationship...

To the end, You intends to face the pressure of the world with the dome, and finally the scene where the two will stand together and conquer Bai Yi.

Close the game, open the game web page, without any slight competition,

With a sigh, Bai Yiyang lay on the bed after turning off the computer.

The jade arm covered the eyes, and the light passed through Bai Yi's arm. Under the light, Bai Yi's soft body lying on the bed rose and fell with some heavy breathing.

This is indeed a very depressing thing. Recently, the sister line has been brewing in Bai Yi’s heart for a long time. Although the script has not been written, the story has also taken shape, but I did not expect it to be One step ahead...

Bai Yi has never been jealous of anyone, not to mention that it was originally a competition. In short, he has already lost in the initial competition, and the sister line has to be abandoned because of the "Yuan Zhi" "Empty", in terms of galgame, basically no one can surpass in three years.

...

Tanmu recently learned the cooking skills of Yumi Mengzi. After continuous practice, although he certainly cannot achieve the cooking skills of Ueno Mengzi, it can’t be regarded as unpalatable. In this regard, Ueno Mengzi specially praised Tan Wood, let Tan Mu old blush.

Uesugi Buyao goes to work and Ueno Mengzi goes to school, so only Qin Mu, two little guys and Bai Yi are left in the family.

One night of sadness, and the script also needed to be reimagined. Early the next morning, Bai Yi went downstairs feebly, her clothes were disheveled, her hair was messy, and she gave the impression of a decadent beauty. She looked very haggard.

Qin Mu, who was making lunch, could not help being worried.

Was this guy really giving up the sister line because of his opposition, and was so sad?

Qin Mu couldn't help but blame himself.

"Sister Bai, Sister Bai, are you okay." Little angel Qin Xue held Bai Yi's soft hands with two small hands, and a pair of big eyes with water spirits looked at Bai Yi worriedly.

"Sister Bai, who bullied you? Xiaotian helped you bully back!" Little angel Qin Tian took a little fist and looked cute to protect Sister Bai.

Seeing the two little guys being so considerate, a warmth rushed from Bai Yi's heart, and he couldn't help giving Qin Tian Qin Xue a kill.

"Thank you two little angels, but my sister is fine...I'll be fine tomorrow..."

"Hmm..." The two little guys were suffocated by a huge weapon, but they couldn't breathe, and the two little hands kept flapping...

Although Bai Yi said it was okay, Qin Mu knew that there must be something wrong with galgame. After all, the system wanted to help her by herself. She would definitely encounter difficulties that she couldn't solve.

It seems... it's time to do it yourself...

Early the next morning, after a day of depression, as Bai Yi said yesterday, she regained vitality and rethought the subject matter.

"No matter what setbacks are encountered, it will only take one day to adjust! But the next day will have to face life again!" This is the motto of the young girl Bai Yi.

In the evening, after taking a shower in the bathroom on the first floor, Tan Mu did not return to the studio, and went straight back to the room, because tonight!He is going to do a major thing!

He wants to cheat!Oh no!Is to help helpless girls...