Reverend Insanity

A number of friends have recently made many valuable suggestions to me.

Some say, "Real people, we can finish the text first, then add the Ancestors of Man." Thank you for your advice, but it is difficult to implement. The text and Human Ancestry are mutually reinforcing. If the text is finished, it's like a built building, and then fill it with little houses. In the end, it looks very unwieldy, disrupting the space and aesthetics of the text layout.

That's a good idea, actually. I've thought about it a long time ago. But if it does, the quality of Human Ancestry is likely to end badly. Because building a house in a built building, there's really too little room for construction.

While this proposal will not be adopted, I would also like to thank you sincerely.

There is another suggestion, which I have adopted.

A reader friend says, "Real people, you might want to write something else while you're thinking about it. These things are also interesting.

I thought about it. That's a really good idea. While these extras also test setting and logic, the difficulty of conceptualizing and writing is much easier than the text + Ancestry of Man.

So, I added the second episode of the rave today, and you can go to the starting point, the magical person, and see it in the related work. This extra section is free. I won't charge for it. Everyone can watch it for free. It's also kind of my time to apologize to everyone.

And today I've changed a lot of the typos.

Specifically in the first major chapter, there are 2, 3, 8, 9, 15, 16, 17, 19, 21, 22, 23, 24, 25, 26, 27, 29, 30, 32, 33, 34, 35, 36, 37, 38, 39, 42, 44, 45, 47, 48, 50.

Today it is provisionally revised to 50 bars. There will be more revisions in the future, and I hope that when readers and friends reread it, they will report the mistakes they see to me as much as possible. Thank you!