The First Order

The last chapter has been rewritten, so you can look at it and you need to refresh it to see it.

Originally it was 6200 words, now it is 7142 words. After deleting and adding, a lot of content has changed.

However, the subject matter has not changed.

Let me talk about the reason for the amendment, mainly because of everyone's opinion on Yan Liuyuan's blackening.

Insomnia till now, still decided to re-examine this chapter, and then look at his shortcomings.

The first thing I want to say is that I don’t agree with the word blackening because, as I said, every character in this book just has his own position, and he can’t distinguish between intuitive good and evil.

Therefore, Yan Liuyuan did not suddenly become a demon without evil, but just had to go his own way.

Secondly, let me summarize the shortcomings of the previous chapter. Because of the anxious update, it caused the foreshadowing not to do enough. It is very unconsidered. When updating, I also feel that I almost feel like something. It seems that what happened should not happen to me. It seemed like it was written, and it took an hour.

So many times I update it around 5:00 PM, but after dragging it to 6:00 yesterday, I can only update it in the end.

I must admit that this is not enough.

So the direction of revision is mainly here.

On the one hand, Yan Liuyuan felt that he could no longer face Ren Xiaosu's reasons, or that he could not face Ren Xiaosu, but could not face himself in the past.

As I posted on Weibo, “Many people will grow up and cannot face their past self”

On the other hand, everyone has been curious, what is the price of Yan Liuyuan's curse now?

I want to talk about this when he goes back to the grassland to face Xiaoyu, but I suddenly found that it's no longer possible to talk here, so I wrote it in the previous chapter.

This is also one of the reasons for the so-called "blackening".

On the other hand, the grassland needs him. When he is next to Ren Xiaosu, he feels more like a vassal of Ren Xiaosu. In the grassland, he does not need others, but others need him.

That's why Kiki has said that.

So in my opinion, Yan Liuyuan made these choices for a comprehensive reason, not for a specific reason.

But because the hasty update was not written, I can only refinish it again. Maybe I will go back to the third refining in the future. Even after this book is finished, I will go back to chapters and chapters and refine it until I am satisfied.

You can look back and come here to discuss.

I was insomnia again today, and I was suffering very much in the evening hours. I was really afraid of the regret that the king would appear again because of the update volume. This feeling is too sad for a storyteller.

Sorry.

Another thing is that the wall of break is not something between Ren Xiaosu and Yan Liuyuan. This is not that I don’t want to abuse you, but these two people in this story, whether it’s from the character or the heart, or even from The analysis of the world's trend will not turn against each other. This is how I look at them both from an objective perspective, so there is no need to force dog blood.

There is no conflict of interest. If Yan Liuyuan really wants to be the king of the world, what will he do according to Ren Xiaosu's character?Ren Xiaosu has never been a person who annihilates his parents, I think so.

The ending of this story has long been decided. A magnificent era should not be a one-man show.

Finally, I also have a sincere attitude to talk to everyone. I hope that if this situation occurs again in the future, I will not be able to update on time and everyone will be more accommodating.

After all, it's quite prudent to see you leave a message saying that I didn't believe it, and I will try my best to be the best, at least the best within my ability.

thank you all.