The Great Villain of Comprehensive Man

Seeing Maolin's hands doing different things, the whole person was obviously immersed in the state of work. The serious attitude made Gui Yanye couldn't help but notice, and then the wooden knife in his hand swung more seriously. !

"Mo, Maureen, are you planning to write light novels?"

When Gui Yanye finished practicing a set of kendo skills in the past, he walked to Maolin curiously and found Maolin was drawing sketches and writing content quickly, and couldn’t help but when Maolin stopped. Asked the sound.

"Yes, I am going to write a light novel~!"

In response to Gui Yanye’s curious question, Maureen chuckled and nodded, then combined the first volume of the light novel he had just written with the illustrations, and then looked at Gui Yan who had just performed a set of kendo operations. Ye, directly handed a stack of manuscript paper to Gui Yanye and said, "Look at Yanye, how about an evaluation?"

"Huh?!"

Seeing Ma Lin handed over the manuscript to herself, Gui Yanye instinctively took it down before she had time to refuse. As a result, Ma Lin's hand directly held her little hand, and the whole person couldn't help but let out a low cry.

When Gui Yanye looked at Ma Lin with a little shyness, it took him a long time to successfully withdraw his hand, and then looked down at the manuscript that Ma Lin had given him, one that looked three or four points similar to Gui Yanye. It was the image of a beautiful swordsman with long hair, and the discovery of this fact made Gui Yanye's pretty face a little red, but there was still a sense of joy in her heart.

For Gui Yanye, the appearance of Maolin's character sketch and her appearance are indeed somewhat similar, which made her feel a little bit of shame in her heart, but it also brought a little bit of shame. The complex feeling of silk joy.

After calming down for a while, Gui Yanye opened the quick sketch of the figure, and then saw the content and title of the first volume of the novel that Maureen said:

"Sword Art Online?!"

(Ahem, there is only one chapter today, I really can’t hold it at night, I went to bed early╮(╯▽╰)╭)

Chapter 22-Maureen's Show of Love

""It's a game, but it's not a joke."-"SAO Sword Art Online" designer * Kayaba Akihiko..."

"Until now, I still can't forget the excitement and enthusiasm that I felt when I saw the name of the game "SwordArtOnline Sword Art Online" reported by major media.

Although NERvGear has realized a new-generation gaming environment of complete stealth, the game software corresponding to this new mechanical structure is not very interesting.Each one is a small and exquisite puzzle-solving, education, and environment game. Game poisoners like me have accumulated quite a lot of dissatisfaction with this situation.

NERvGear can create a real imaginary world.

However, what was created was just a small world where you would hit a wall when you walk a hundred meters. That is simply putting the cart before the horse.Since the launch of the machine, I and other game enthusiasts who dream of entering the game world will start to look forward to certain types of games, and it is only natural.

Of course, what we are looking forward to is the game that corresponds to the network connection-and it is an online role-playing game where thousands or tens of thousands of players are online at the same time to cultivate their own clones to fight and live.

When the expectation and desire have reached a critical point, the game company is confident to announce that this is called the world's first game type, the virtual reality online game "SwordArtOnline Sword Art Online"..."

"According to Kaaba Akihiko-senpai, I will not be able to return to the real world for a period of time, a few months, or even longer. I will not be able to meet or even talk to family and friends. And maybe I have no chance to see them again, if I die in this world..."

"At this moment, I can see the long black hair that has been disguised under the other person’s cloak, and that familiar and familiar face is surprisingly the daughter of the neighbor I know, Asuna who just went to high school. !"

...

Seeing the end of the newly completed "Sword Art Online" initial volume, it is obvious that the character Asuna who replaced herself as the heroine, and the person who has the heroine Asuna who is almost five-point similar to herself, has just been created. Gui Yanye, who was fascinated by the novel underestimated, turned blushing after brushing her pretty face.

Gui Yanye had just read the initial volume of "Sword Art Online" and was obviously attracted by Maureen Mo's revised "Sword Art Online". The whole person was immersed in the story of the first volume of the "Sword Art Online" novel.

I have to say that in Morin’s memory, "Sword Art Online" deserves to be an ultra-popular light novel with a circulation of over 10 million volumes, and he deliberately modified his new novels he experienced in the world of "Sword Art Online" The content of the two chapters published may be weaker than that of the original version, but it is more immersive and realistic (completely his personal experience), but it is much stronger than the original plot, and it is close to After more than a dozen decades, it is possible to realize a completely submerged science fiction light novel, and naturally there will be an eye-catching title.

For Gui Yanye, of course, she has read some literary novels, and for light novels, she has read a few books. At any rate, she can still see the general level of "Sword Art Online", which definitely exceeds what she has read. A few light novels, the realism and details of their writing are undoubtedly master level, the content is temporarily unable to see the direction of the big topic, but only by "submerged virtual games", "you will die if you lose Novel content such as "Death Game" is enough to attract many readers to be interested in this light novel.

What makes Gui Yanye even more embarrassed is that when she saw the ending volume of "Sword Art Online", when the actor gathered up the courage to stand up and shouted when Akihiko Kayaba announced the death game, the one who finally appeared Asuna, who is obviously an important character, is her own character in terms of setting...

[Woo~!Really, does Mr. Morin consider me the heroine?!

Seeing the sketch of the heroine Asuna wearing a sword-like weapon, Gui Yanye couldn't help but carefully look at the heroine and heroine Asuna's sketch of the sketch, and turned it over to see that it just ended. The end of the story.

"Yanye, what do you think of this work?"

Maureen watched Gui Yanye flip through his own works, but he asked with confidence, although it seemed doubtful.

"Very, very interesting work...or rather...very attractive work..."

Hearing Ma Lin's inquiry, Gui Yanye quickly raised his head and looked at Ma Lin, and found that Ma Lin was looking at her with a smile, but hesitated and said seriously.

It's not that Gui Yanye said this out of politeness. The quality of "Sword Art Online" by Maureen is still very good. The problem is that Gui Yanye doesn't have a deep understanding of light novels—not too much. I hope that Gui Yanye MM, who spends most of his time in various studies every day, has too much knowledge and experience of Zhai Xiang's light novels, right?

Therefore, Gui Yanye took a serious attitude and ruled out the influence of the character that Maureen wrote into the novel. With his own opinions and feelings, he gave a very sincere answer!

"So, can Yanye continue to help me to perfect this light novel?"

Seeing Gui Yanye's reaction, Maureen laughed happily, and then pointed to the magic-revised "Sword Art Online" in Gui Yanye's hand, and seriously made an honest suggestion to the girl.

"...Good, good!"

After only hesitating for a few seconds, Gui Yanye nodded gently and agreed to Maureen's request.

For Gui Yanye, agreeing to the strict learning and ability requirements from her mother has almost become her instinct.

However, Gui Yanye’s request was not difficult for Gui Yanye to study. Considering that he had about ten days of leisure time before at least attending high school in Tokyo, Gui Yanye agreed to Maureen. The request for assistance from... Well, this is definitely not because Gui Yanye was very curious about how the story of the female character Asuna played in the story of "Sword Art Online" written by Maureen unfolded.

Seeing that Gui Yanye agreed to his proposal, Ma Lin had a gentle smile and began to sit in the garden with the shameful Gui Yanye, and began to discuss the plot and people of "Sword Art Online" Suppose the topic...

...

The next day, the living room of Gui's new villa.

Maureen and Gui Yanye sat in the living room with each other. The two even leaned closer to each other, at least two chairs sitting side by side. Maureen took out the "Sword Art Online" manuscript that had not been finished yesterday. Speaking to Gui Yanye again.

"Yanye, I already have a rough definition of the character design of "Sword Art Online". The heroine Asuna's colorful character design looks like this..."

Looking at Gui Yanye who brought tea and snacks, Maolin first thanked the girl, and then took some time last night to complete the color drawing of the personal corner of the "Sword Art Online", to Gui Yanye who had just sat down Explained.

Of course, Maureen’s "Sword Art Online" character design color drawing has made a magical change. Although the heroine is still called "Asuna", Maureen obviously did not paint the image of Asuna. On the contrary, it is more biased towards Gui Yanye's personal image, and the weapon has also changed from the European-style rapier used by Asuna in the real SAO to the familiar sword that Gui Yanye is good at and familiar with.

Maureen’s painted portraits are very effective. The "Asuna" wearing [Starblaze] guild costumes still looks heroic, and Maureen’s attitude towards "Asuna" The character is obviously more biased towards the setting of Katsura Yana, except that Katsura herself and Asuna's family background are similar to the setting of the family (both are both girls born, and Assina chose to enter secretly once SAO’s game, but Gui Yanye’s experience is so sighing), in the "Asuna" character design of the modified version of "Sword Art Online", it is obvious that the introverted personality "Asuna" is wearing [ Star Flame]'s female swordsman costume, the rugged figure is enough to make Asuna become angry and ignore Maureen.

But for Maureen, the design of this "Asuna" person is quite realistic. It fully highlights the attractive figure of Gui Yanye himself, and at the same time outlines a determined person. The image of the beautiful girl swordsman, based on Maureen’s precise pen-holding technique, the colorful image of "Asuna" can be called a vivid, heroic and stunning beautiful girl swordsman. It is estimated to be attractive to readers. Still above the original "Sword Art Online", right?

Obviously, Gui Yanye saw yesterday that Maureen’s light novel of "Sword Art Online" used herself as a predetermined female character, a little shy and a little curious, and carefully looked at the characters provided by Maureen. The image seems to be attracted by the image of "Asuna", looking at and thinking in a dream...

"... Then, that, Maureen!"

After watching the image of "Asuna" for a while, Gui Yanye converged his mind, looked at the spiritual image of "Asuna", and then looked at part of the manuscript paper newly written by Ma Lin and found that "Ya "Sina" is also under pressure from family and study. When the whole person confided to the protagonist that he secretly used his brother's helmet to enter the SAO game, there was a hint of envy in his heart.But when she saw the next plot, the protagonist and "Asuna" lived in the same room in the game and described the scene intimately, the pretty face became ruddy after brushing, and she couldn't help but stutter a little. Said to Maureen: "This...the heroine and the heroine will hug and rest in the same room... isn't it..."

Well, Gui Yanye is actually shy!

Although it is a new chapter in the novel of "Sword Art Online", the female character of "Asuna" is just talking to the male protagonist, and then rests in the same room with the male protagonist on the first night of the SAO game.

From Maureen’s own point of view, as well as the plot description of the original light novel of "Sword Art Online", it’s a bit too fast for "Asuna" to sleep in the same bed with the protagonist on the first day, but it is not immediately Turning into a matter of intimate contact, however, Gui Yanye directly substituted herself into the role of "Asuna", thinking that she was held by Maureen...Well, Gui Yanye only needs to think of this kind of reverie. After seeing the scene of Maureen who impressed her at the first meeting, the whole person felt blushing.

In this case, when Maolin asked with a smile and was about to be shoulder to shoulder with her, Gui Yanye put forward a seemingly reasonable reason, trying to divert Maolin's attention!

"Why, Yanye, do you think the story goes too fast?"

Regarding Gui Yanye’s doubts, Ma Lin’s gaze was still looking at Gui Yanye, who gave the standard Yamato Nadeshiko feel in front of him, and then looked at his own magically revised version of the "Sword Art Online" color portrait and the draft of the first few chapters. He asked rhetorically.