The system invites me to be a teacher

Without hesitation, Han Qingyun clicked on his tablet directly, and saw that it was his song [Yesterday, Today, and Tomorrow]:

Yesterday you were innocent, immature and lively

Full of hope and joy

Today your city is deep, melancholy and dull

Tired and exhausted again

What about you tomorrow?

I don't know

But it is undeniable that life is always full of deep dangers

And hardships

...

Throwing away the content, Han Qingyun looked directly at the small points and comments next to him:

Sub-point: 100.

not bad!

Comment: The poem is refined, profound, philosophical, and thought-provoking. It only feels that it lacks a little positive energy, but this is just a statement from the family and not a scoring criterion.

He shook his head helplessly. Although he was satisfied with the results, the experts commented that he lacked positive energy, but he could not agree.

Because in Han Qingyun's view, works that can truly touch people's souls are all tragedies.

Even if it is a comedy at first, it must end in tragedy in the end.

Although the country is now vigorously promoting positive energy, it is only aimed at the selfish social status quo in the past few years, and has nothing to do with literary works.

If it is forced and forced, it will only laugh generously.

As I was thinking, I suddenly heard Long Aotian yell next door: "Teacher Kong is awesome, he is number one again!"

Who knows what he said, but his teammate Zhen Tiehan's eyes were rolled: "Hush... silence! Is it necessary to yell so loudly? Besides, when is our teacher Kong not the first?"

"Uh...Okay! It's me who exaggerated and almost forgot "Advise to Learn"..."

"..."

Han Qingyun: "???"

He quickly looked at the ranking in the lower right corner, and he realized that there was a big 2 there!

"How is this possible?"

Han Qingyun was stunned. At the first glance he saw Xiao Fen just now, he let go of the big stone in his heart.

A small score of 100, as the name suggests, must be a well-deserved number one!

In other words, the champion of the 4D team in this link is stable!

He even thought about the comments of the expert group and didn't even look at the ranking.

...

At this time, Zhang Yue's voice sounded again: "Okay, five minutes is up, I wonder if you have any objections to your rating and ranking?

No, then I will announce the promotion name now..."

"Wait, I have!"

No one spoke for a long time, and just as Zhang Yue was about to make an official announcement, a voice suddenly called out, it was Han Qingyun.

Zhang Yue didn't feel annoyed by being interrupted inexplicably. He smiled and said, "I don't know who this teacher is? Also, do you have any doubts about your grades?"

Han Qingyun pointed to his tablet and said, “I’m Han Qingyun, the instructor of the Yang Ziwen team from Siwei Middle School. The expert group for this poem I wrote gave me a small score of 100. As a perfect score, I want to ask why I’m only number 2?”

The instructors of the other teams couldn't help coughing violently.

what's going on?

For the instructors of all the teams, everyone wants to pick out the faults of the expert group, so that they can get a little more points, so that the team can be more advanced.

It's a pity that the small scores and comments given by the expert group to their own works are very pertinent, even if they want to propose again, they have nothing to say.

Seeing that this article was about to be revealed by Zhang Yue, I was disappointed. Suddenly someone took the lead and everyone was naturally extremely excited.

Because I can completely judge whether to follow the appeal in the next step based on the opinions and results of the leader.

I didn't know the result, and I was shocked when I heard it.

This guy who dared to be the first to eat crabs, his team ranked second, and his poems were also second...

Nima, are you sure you are really giving an opinion?Instead of showing off naked?

Without such a group of ridicules and slaps!

Of course, this is just the idea of ​​most of the mentors who are worried about whether their team can successfully advance.

The doubts of some people who can think normally are also very normal: This teacher Han said it’s okay. You give people 100 points, but you don’t give first place. Then how can you get the first place?

"This..." In fact, Zhang Yue also complained about Han Qingyun's troubles in his heart, but since the other party raised it, it is impossible not to help him solve his confusion.

Zhang Yue didn't participate in the specific ranking, so he didn't know the reason.

I was about to contact the expert group for inquiries, and suddenly a voice said: "No need to ask, I can give you an explanation for this matter."

However, it was Li Yifu, the president of the [Ancient Prose League Association], who had stood on the stage at some point.

Li Yifu smiled and said to the people: "Dear mentors, classmates, hello everyone."

Bang bang bang...

Seeing that he is so popular, President Li is also very happy: "First of all, I want to make one point. Regarding the ranking of each instructor's work, to be honest, the evaluation given by the expert group is not absolutely fair.

In particular, the separation points between different echelons are a bit vague. If any instructor is eliminated because of this, I am here to make amends for you."

As soon as he said this, the instructor who had some criticisms felt calmer.

Yes, everyone's works are of the same level. It is impossible to be absolutely fair.

If you take a bit of a loss, you should be a bit of a loss. If you can hear President Li apologize personally, even if you are eliminated, it is not in vain.

Li Yifu said, "To tell the truth, Teacher Han's poem is actually excellent.

Although there are some details that can be refined, but considering that only 30 minutes, plus the idea time, can write such a level, the country is not much better than him.

So after careful consideration, I approved this full score.

Not much nonsense, let's take a look at the works of Teacher Han!"

"Yesterday you were innocent, immature and lively

Full of hope and joy

..."

After reading it in one breath, the instructors couldn't help but nod. This is indeed a good little poem.

Although the language is simple and unpretentious, it is very flavorful, especially after reading it a few times, there will be new insights.

Such a good poem, it should be no problem to give it first!

Han Qingyun held his head high and couldn't help showing a smile. A poem he wrote in a hurry can be recognized by everyone, which is an extreme affirmation of his talent.

This is also the original intention of his love for literary creation.

Sure enough, I listened to Li Yifu's words: "In my opinion, I gave Teacher Han a number one, there is no problem, and I did the same when I first saw this poem.

It’s just that I changed my mind later. I didn’t have an opinion on Teacher Han, but there can only be one in the first place!

Next, please comment on the works of the instructor's poetry champion in this [Learning Rich Five Cars] session!"

After hearing what Li Yifu said earlier, Han Qingyun was quite proud at first, but then he was taken aback, and then he was deeply dissatisfied.

Although he didn't say a word about Confucius and Mencius when he made comments just now, Li Yifu didn't even mention that Confucius and Mencius was the first.

But Han Qingyun, who was very clear in his heart, firmly did not believe that this new teacher, who had just entered Zhiyuan, could surpass himself in poetry creation.

You know, he has nearly ten years of creative experience, and he has published no less than a thousand masterpieces in printed publications.

Take a deep breath and calm down. He wanted to see what the other party wrote, so that President Li could directly deny himself!

The big screen flashed, and eight clear characters came into view:

"Facing the Ocean, Spring and Blossom"

Be a happy man from tomorrow on

Feed horses, chop wood, travel the world

From tomorrow on, care about food and vegetables

I have a house,

Facing the Ocean, Spring and Blossom

From tomorrow on, communicate with every relative

Tell them my happiness

That happy lightning told me

I will tell everyone

Give every river and every mountain a warm name

Strangers, I also bless you

Wish you a bright future

May your lover finally get married

Wish you happiness in this world

I just want to face the sea and the spring flowers bloom

This poem...

After reading it again and again, Han Qingyun stopped speaking in a daze.

In his mind, he suddenly remembered the comment under the poem given to him by the expert group: lack of positive energy!