Upgrade Specialist in Another World

Almost two months after the book was issued, more than 200,000 words were written in a volume. After today's chapter was updated, there was a slight glitch in my mind.

To be honest, I didn't expect this book to do anything like this, and I want to thank everyone for their support, and, uh, my editor for that.

The first volume of the story is generally satisfactory to me, although there were many problems in the writing. For example, when Zhang Zhenshan wrote the battle to hunt down Baiyunfei, some bookmates complained that the fighting was too noisy. For example, when the chapters of Liu Meng were written, some bookmates complained that the blood of the dog was too stupid. Yunhai wrote the book for the first time, maybe many aspects of grasping it was inappropriate. Here, thanks to those who kindly gave their opinions.

At the end of the first volume, I felt relieved. This volume was the first step, saying that 300,000 words in a novel was the first cane, and in the next second volume, I thought I could take this cane in one breath and start a new step. Because so many people are there for me, even if I'm tired, it's worth it.

The contents of the first volume seem a little heavy, from the initial revenge to being hunted down, and then deceived. Some bookmates may find this a little depressing. For example, when Liu Meng was first written, some bookmates said that he was too stupid to look at it. Ha, I wonder if the following bookmates also felt that Liu Meng had a bit of a failure in writing?

In fact, the original intention was to let the cloud fly out of Qingyun directly, even without Zhang Zhenshan's pursuit, and naturally without Liu Meng's deception, but then I felt that if the cloud fly out of Qingyun directly to face the thousand world outside, it seemed a little too hasty, if I wrote him out, how can I get along smoothly, see the trick, encounter enemies, seems a little inappropriate (I think). So he arranged the appearance of Liu Meng, as Han Zheng's bookmate said, this‘ Zhu Jiuzhen ’style character, to allow Yunfei to grow in emotion.

Yunfei's mind is determined, the resolute decision in the encounter is cultivated by eighteen years of perseverance (of course, there is also a hint of the influence of the crosser), but as I said in the beginning, 'Intelligence and emotion should be separate'. For Yunfei, who has hardly ever had contact with the opposite sex for eighteen years of hard living, emotional aspects are blank, so when Liu Meng appeared, he would lose judgment like that. In fact, my intention was to write some more of their stories, so that Yunfei and Liu Meng could live together for a longer time. After that, for example, when Liu Meng wanted to deceive the secrets of fortification technology, it would also be reasonable, and not appear abrupt. But the reaction of the bookmates was huge, so they accelerated the plot and jumped straight to the breakdown.

I don't know if you're happy with the story in Cuiliu.

I've always said that what I want to write is Shuang Wen, but the first volume doesn't seem to be very pleasant, heh, there's no way, the plot is limited, always in a vulnerable cloud, it's impossible to kill the Quartet from the beginning. At the beginning of the second volume, I will write a relaxed and refreshing story that will make everyone look happy and smile. Then my dedication will be recognized, and it will not be futile.

After writing the book these days, you really realize the hard work of the author. After reading a chapter in a few minutes, the author probably has to write for a few hours. Sometimes for a sentence, an action, a painful thought for a few decades, beat and deleted, deleted and written, then wrote again...

So, I also want to say to my friends who read the book, even if you see a novel, you don't like the plot, even if you think it sucks, don't insult the author, if it really doesn't suit your taste, then quietly leave is, from now on, don't look at the book, and you won't get upset. Because it's likely that a malicious sentence will affect the author for hours or even days.

Remember when I first saw the first bad review in the book rating area, I was completely depressed one afternoon plus one night. Although I understood that I didn't have to worry about this, my book could not be accepted by all readers, but I just couldn't control my heart's sadness, because what he sprayed, it took me hours, even days, to even eat and sleep and then knock out the story...

When the book was first issued, there were 70,000 manuscripts. At that time, I didn't understand the importance of manuscripts at all. Those days I was preparing for the final science exam of driving school, and then the manuscripts were sent out. The cups and utensils were updated every day by 5,000 words. The current code was found. Apart from eating and going to the toilet, my butt basically never left the stool. Whenever I saw people say a few thousand words an hour, my balls hurt so bad that I wanted to drop the computer, because I had hundreds of words an hour...

Later, the previous time to prepare for graduation can only be more every day, the renewal is not strong, Yunhai also has no intention of asking for red tickets and so on. For the hard chasing, I can't read every day of the book friends, Yunhai said sorry here, heh, for some time after that, at least before going to the company, Yunhai will try to code every day, as much as possible.

Yunnan flew out of Qingyun and started his real life path. Yunnai also got his college diploma yesterday and was about to start his own struggle. Oh, I didn't study hard, I could only mix in a vocational college for three years, and now I'm going to really walk into society. In the face of that various social conditions, to be honest, I'm not like Yunfei. I'm very confused...

Next month at the latest, I'm going to work for a company in Hebei. I don't even know about this company. I only know what to do if I go...

Uh... I wanted to write a summary of the first volume, and it turned out to be my own complaint, huh, so be it.

Finally, thank my good brother Zheng Kai (well, that's the one who played soy sauce a long time ago, he was the first dragon set... Oh, Zheng Kai said it wasn't a dragon set, he was going to be male number two...), but he had always supported Yunhai before I submitted, even exaggerated, at that time without his daily encouragement, I probably wouldn't have been able to write the first 70,000 words, I wouldn't have contributed, and probably wouldn't have had this book. There are also good brothers such as Bin, Kun Peng and many other students who came to support me (remember the days before I sent the book, no one asked, all these friends helped to support me).

Of course, at the end of the day, there is absolutely no shortage of all the bookmates who support Yunhai, such as Xiaobinzi (and the previous brother Bin is not alone). He provided me with a group of bookmates and was one of the first readers to support Yunhai. Today, he dedicated himself to me. Thank you very much for your support.

And ‘selethky’ bookmate, he was the first bookmate to dedicate to me. I remember seeing the empty dedicating area suddenly added a name. Yunhai was excited for a little half a day, huh...

Brother Hongxiang, ‘1354354354’, Tianming, Animal, Han Zhang, July, L, Xiaowei, Ink Eyes, Dark as Night, Dream Killing, Soul Floating, Yan Xu, etc. (Here are a few casually, and there are also many people and often speaking in the book evaluation area in support of Yunhai, Yunhai is not a single name here, your support, Yunhai look in the eyes, keep in mind, thank you very much), of course, there are also many people who do not like to speak, but also silently support Yunhai and cast their precious red tickets...

There are also many author friends, and at the beginning of the book, thanks to the support and encouragement of the author friends in the group. Xiaotian, Yuehua, Marks, Dreamweave, Shiloh, Eight Wings, Swordsnow, Butcher, Tomorrow Moon Brother, and so on, and so much more, it's not all here...

(Well, one sentence should be added here: all rankings above are irrelevant, huh.

Why are you thanking the General Assembly again? Khan... Shall I add a word of thanks to the Patriotic Party and CC *? Oh, no? Then forget it...

Oh, that's it, Yunhai went on to sort out the second volume of the story.

One last shout - thank you for your support of Yunhai!!!