What if my daughter wants to be a star

(Note: This article only represents Su Ye's personal opinion and has no relationship with the dog author.)

Su Qingxue plays the female one, Chen Jing, Ye Feng plays the male one greasy residue, Yu Ge plays the piano player Wang Wen, and Lin Yan plays the violinist Zheng Youen.

Ok……

When all the roles were determined, Su Ye suddenly found that this lineup was a bit familiar.

"Damn, isn't this the lineup of "Twilight" back then!" Han Ling first reacted and said in surprise.

"Yes indeed!"

When Han Ling was reminded, everyone remembered.

Didn't these four people start from "Twilight"!

Su Qingxue played the heroine Qi Ya, Ye Feng played the hero Lin Xihua, Yu Ge played the villain Zhan You, and Lin Yan played Lin Xueli.

That was the first play after Su Qingxue officially learned to perform, and it was also Ye Feng's first play in her acting career, and it was also the first play that Lin Yan broke through the bans of many associate directors and restarted.

Of course it is also where the road of Yu Ge's villain begins.Since "Twilight", Yu Ge has been "enthusiastic" about various villain roles.

Grandma has become a grandmother, and so has the wheel king.

Is there any villain that Yu Ge can't be?!

"Then this time, I can recall the past." Su Ye said with a smile.

After formalizing the shooting plan of "Flash Girl", Su Ye began to write the outline.

Although the original "Flash Girl" is called "the most buried movie in 17 years", it has a lot to do with "Flash Girl"'s excellent combination of folk music and the second element, and the battle between folk music and Western music. .Overall, this movie still has many small flaws.

The most obvious flaw is of course the exaggerated description of the second dimension.

Although the screenwriter has the purpose of highlighting that the second dimension is not accepted by ordinary people, it is really too embarrassing to be too embarrassing.Su Ye moderately weakened this sense of embarrassment.

For example, it is absolutely impossible for a few girls in the 502 dormitory to wear cos clothes every day.

But the most embarrassing thing is that Hun Gufeng still has to read through Chinese history...

Aren’t the history students all senior antiquity masters?

When watching this movie at that time, what Su Ye was most dissatisfied with was that both the heroine and the heroine deliberately highlighted a kind of "soil".

The female protagonist’s fluffy hair is almost soiled, while the male protagonist wears braces, his hair is messy and greasy, deliberately pretending to be ugly.

This kind of "earth" is naturally to echo the "earth" of folk music.

However, in Su Ye's view, this is the biggest failure of this movie.

The second dimension and ancient style can be regarded as the exaggeration of highlighting niche culture.However, in order to set off the "earth" of folk music, the protagonist's modeling is also "earth", which is definitely the creator's mind.

This abrupt way of opposing folk music and western music completely fell into the bottom.

If you think carefully about the metaphors between the character's modeling and folk music, you will have a feeling of "this group of folk music learners seem to look down on themselves".

If you really feel that what you have learned is good and that you don't lose to Western music at all, then why do you show a state of self-deprecation?

So when Su Ye was creating the script, he immediately changed the image of the hero and heroine from two sloppy youths to two forced youths.

The heroine Chen Jing's look is no longer soiled, but with dry short hair, sunny, but with a somewhat different personality.

The male protagonist took off his braces and looked normal and handsome.

In the original film, the hero has a "transformation drama" that is very important.On the show, the male protagonist took off his braces, took off his clothes, and immediately became a handsome guy.Then a girl shouted immediately: "Look, there is little meat!"

This drama is true and does not conform to common sense.

The first point is that, in reality, it is absolutely impossible to hang a big coffee like Qianzhi adults as a display.

Gufeng has a place in comic exhibitions and is very popular.What's more, how can the two thorn apes disappear after they are separated, do you think it is here in "Predecessor Three: Goodbye Predecessor"?

This paragraph is too exaggerated, no wonder the second thorn apes spray "Flash Girl" bloody.

So Su Ye modified this paragraph reasonably.

He didn't want to offend the two princes in the parallel world.

The most important thing to change is the attitude of the audience when a few people are on the court.

It must be possible to walk. Su Ye is here, pointing the contradiction to the combination of the previous stage.

Su Ye changed the setting to a larger stage, and the combination that went on stage before was a well-known girl combination in China.Many people in the audience watched this girl group.

So when the protagonist took the stage, especially when he saw the clothes of the heroine and the heroine, some people immediately dispersed.

In the original film, the clothes worn by the heroine and heroine are costumes (let's call them costumes). Here, Su Ye just let the two wear ordinary clothes, which is in sharp contrast with the other four solemn cos 502 members. Produce a feeling that the two do not respect the performance.

On another point, Su Ye changed Master Qianzhi to never show his face, only showing his hands to play the guzheng.In this way, without knowing that Lord Qianzhi is Lord Qianzhi, a group of people in the audience walked away. Although some others did not leave, they started to wander away with their mobile phones and did not listen carefully.

The protagonists on the stage felt the emotional changes of the audience, and they were a little bit disappointed.At the moment of loss, the male protagonist suddenly yelled and pulled off his coat to reveal the "Wukong" cos suit inside. At the same time, he sprayed his hair with yellow hair dye very handsomely, grabbed it a few times, and immediately Become the Super Saiyan Monkey King.

Monkey King's "reincarnation" immediately caused the audience to scream.

The music officially sounded, the very familiar music, and the very handsome plucked strings, so that the people in the audience immediately recognized that this is Lord Qianzhi!

So more and more people ran over to cheer for Qianzhi adults and for the stage.

In the original film, "Power of the World" was played here.The reason for choosing this tune is of course because "Quan Yu Tian Xia" can be described as the ultimate divine comedy, and it is as widely circulated as "Thousand Ben Sakura".

The film chooses this song as the repertoire. It only needs a prelude to immediately cause a sensation in the audience of the two thorn apes.

But unfortunately, Parallel World does not have this "Power of the World". Even if Su Ye wants to make one directly, it is impossible to get it into the movie.

Because it can't achieve the sensational effect of "Qu Yu Tianxia" on the earth.

So Su Ye chose "Qi Tian" in the town station of Parallel World P station.(Huahua has a song of the same name on the earth, which is very nice)

This song is quite popular in the ancient style circle of the parallel world and even in the second dimension. It is sung by the big brother of the ancient style "Ba Jie"-Ba Jie sings the monkey brother. I don't know what the ulterior relationship between the two is. -Since its inception, it has been well received.

With a passionate style and passionate words, this song tells the unyielding road of Monkey King Monkey King, and is regarded as a divine comedy by many people.

With this song being the first stage of the "2.5 Dimension" band, it can definitely achieve a sensational effect!

After this episode, it ushered in an important turning point in the whole film, that is, the scene where Chen Jing was rejected by his brother Wang Wen.

There is not much awkwardness in this scene, at most there are some problems with the lines.

The "passionate speech" of greasy residue is the finishing touch to the whole film, and it is a bonus item, which makes people feel goose bumps.

But following Chen Jing's line, "When you remember to be seventeen years old, you will definitely regret it than we are", and the whole plot of the plot instantly fell.

Hey!People want to go abroad, go abroad for further study, as long as they work hard, they will be successful.What kind of girl can't get it then?At the age of seventeen years of abstinence for a year, what regrets!

Moreover, the previous sentence of oil residue still said why Western music looks down on folk music. How do you see the line of the heroine has a feeling of pulling emotions onto love.

Su Ye thought about it, but she didn't expect how this sentence should be rounded out, so she deleted it altogether.

In a scene, it is enough for one person to pretend.

Forcibly dragging the heroine out to pretend to be coercion, it will be maddeningly compelling!

After that, the hostess had a dialogue with the band members and decided to disband the band.This paragraph is extremely embarrassing.

The hostess in the front called "I want my brother to remember what the Yangqin is", and then started to say, "My mother asked me to learn the Yangqin, and then I will learn it", creating an irreconcilable human contradiction.

If the hostess doesn't like the Yangqin, why is she angry when the brother looks down on the Yangqin?Because it was rejected by brother?

Logically unreasonable.

So here, Su Ye deleted the embarrassing conversation.When the two-dimensional girls in the 502 bedroom said that they shouldn't do it, Chen Jing, who was a little frustrated because she was rejected by the senior, just said a word and waited until school started.

This sentence made a few girls sad, and they felt that Chen Jing didn't want to make the band anymore.

But Chen Jing just hasn't emerged from the shadow of rejection.

After returning home, Chen Jing told his mother that he didn't want to learn music anymore.Here is still a state of discouragement.

My mother saw something wrong with Chen Jing and asked her if she was broken in love.

Chen Jing did not speak.

Mother told Chen Jing why she let her learn Yangqin.Then he said to Chen Jing, if you don't like it, then stop studying.

Chen Jing stopped talking, because if she didn't like it, she wouldn't be angry for her brother's contempt for the Yangqin, nor would she have studied for so many years.In the silence, the camera showed a few two-dimensional girls, and then Chen Jing recalled the bit by bit of learning Yangqin, and finally decided to continue learning.

As a result, the plot developed to the biggest highlight of the film.

The principal decided to cancel the enrollment of Minle, Qianzhi adults stood up and shouted, "Isn't this an endless loop?"

Chen Jing stood up resolutely, supported Lord Qianzhi and shouted "We have a band".

Here, Su Ye added a scene.

After the school meeting, Chen Jing found several people in the 502 dormitory and asked for forgiveness.Several people asked Chen Jing: "Don't you want to form a band?" Chen Jing still used the second-hand youth style to say to several people: "I was stunned by love. Since I like Yangqin and folk music, why? Don't continue?"

Finally, add another sentence: "You guys don't want to do it anymore. If I don't form a band, how much money I will lose invisibly!"

It might be better to deal with the plot like this.

Although conflicts are not as prominent as the original film, at least in the plot, it can be quite reasonable.