My Cartoonist Strategy

After Lu Ning painted "The Gate of Destiny Stone" by himself, the mirroring has been significantly improved than before, and the personalities given are more skilled, even with the shadow of "The Gate of Destiny Stone" vaguely, This shows that Lu Ning gradually has his own style.

The name of the manga is relatively long, and it is called "Girls Crossing the Parallel World". As you can see from the name, this manga is not the same as other traditional manga, and it takes the girl as the first perspective.

Such works are very rare, because there are special magazines that take girls as the first perspective. Usually, the readers of this type of comics are mostly girls-oriented comics. Magazines are also known as girl magazines, such as "Girls' Century".

Such works have more delicate feelings, and, because girls are comics, there are more handsome guys.

However, "ComicFuture" is a young manga, most of the readers are boys, even if there are female cartoonists serialized, most of the stories are described from the perspective of boys.

Like "Girls Crossing a Parallel World", the title of the book shows that the angle of view is a girl, and whether such comics can attract readers is really hard to say.

Hook took out Fengyoujing and wiped his temples.

This comic must be attentive, otherwise, it makes a wrong judgment and is not very good for the two teachers and the magazine.

"I said... Xiaoli..." Hu Ke put away Fengyoujing and looked at Wu Xiaoli.

"Ok?"

"I asked you one thing... that, have you seen this?"

Hook also knew that the answer was "yes", but he was still uneasy.

"Team leader, this, it was me and Mr. Xi Muhan who worked together for two weeks before they were finalized." Wu Xiaoli said patiently.

"Do you know that "ComicFuture" is a juvenile comic?" Hook asked again.

"Of course I know." Wu Xiaoli nodded.

"That's good……"

After hearing the "yes" answer, Hook took a deep breath and his eyes fell on him again.

Now that Wu Xiaoli knows this, then he can rest assured.

"Girls Crossing the Parallel World" is about a girl named "An Jie" who has always had a good impression on her classmate Wang He, but she has never been afraid to confess to Wang He.

On a class trip, An Jie met Wang He at the beach, and the two smiled at each other.

Suddenly, there was a big wave at the beach, and An Jie had to run away in the future, and he and Wang He were involved in the big wave.

Sudden changes made Hook's scalp numb and many goose bumps on his body.

This turning point came too quickly.It's almost unexpected.

The heroine died suddenly at the first words?What is this God unfolding?

Wait, the title is called "Girls Crossing the Parallel World"...Isn't the heroine crossing?

Hook opened the next page again. Sure enough, An Jie opened her eyes. She was lying on the bed, and the alarm at the table showed 6:30.

It turned out to be a dream.

An Jie quickly put on her clothes, washed and ate, and took the subway to the school. During the pre-training, her eyes turned to Wang He, while other people sat on Wang He's seat.

Until the end of the first class, Wang He still did not come.

"I just found out that classmate Wang He's seat... was changed by the teacher." An Jie was embarrassed to ask Wang He for the reason that he didn't come.

At the same table, he turned back surprisedly, looked at An Jie, and touched An Jie's forehead with his hand. "Did you have a fever?"

"what happened?"

"Wang He is dead... he died a year ago..."

Reading this, Hook was covered with goose bumps.

It seems that the plot is flat, but the direction of the plot is somewhat unexpected.

This cartoon...some mean evil cartoon.

Hook held his breath again and continued to look down.

An Jie thought that she was joking at the same table, and quickly inquired about several recent collective activities, but found that all the same table denied.

An Jie was not reconciled. After returning home at night,

Obviously... there is Wang He.

An Jie remembers very clearly that she has seen this class photo many times, and even Wang He’s smile can be remembered clearly.

Just when she was suspicious, something suddenly hit the window.She crept open the window, and suddenly a person curled up and stepped on the edge of the window, and it was Wang He...

After reading the first words, countless reversals made Hook hooked.

Then, the second and third words were to advance the story. An Jie did go through, because she could see things that ordinary people can't see, goblins.And from this, the plot is unfolded.

"How is it? Team leader." Wu Xiaoli asked.

"Yes, the quality of the first words is the highest, the plot of the next two words is stable, the world view is developed, which is in line with the rhythm of the comics..."

Wu Xiaoli nodded again and again, "I think so."

"But one thing...no, there is one saying, I think it's a little bit fluent." Hook hesitated.

"Huh? Is there?"

"It’s not too big, just think that the reversal of the first sentence is too much. If this is a evil comic, then this opening is extremely exciting, and it can even overwhelm all comics except "", but it is obvious, This is not a evil Dao comic. The comic introduces a monster, but the monster is not directly related to the death of Wang He... In fact, when a person dies, the atmosphere of the story becomes serious and repressed... is it possible to use transfer The excuse of the class is replaced, otherwise, the tone of the story is too dark.

"Of course, I'm not saying that there can't be a dark tone, but that the tone is laid out in the first sentence, which is inconsistent with the atmosphere of the second and third words, and it is easy for readers to feel "fooled". Personal advice , A little bit of the dark tone of the first words."

Wu Xiaoli frowned, carefully recalled, and the whole atmosphere of the story. I have to say that Hook also made sense. The atmosphere of the first sentence was too heavy compared with the latter two.

At that time, I just wanted to attract readers quickly, but I forgot that this comic was not a evil comic.

It's better to modify it again.

Wu Xiaoli put this in her notes, and then asked, "Leader, what are the shortcomings?"

"The other aspects are all right. The overall quality is very high and people want to read it. However, it is still very difficult to observe the world from the perspective of girls. I hope the two teachers can create a wonderful work. The title of the book... is it too long? We are not editors of light novels, we don’t need to have such a long name?"

"what?"

Hearing Hu Ke's comment, Wu Xiaoli had a black line, and she thought it was the title of the most appropriate subject.

change name?What should it be called?

Wu Xiaoli scratched her head, it seems that she can only discuss with Xi Muhan again.

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