Shen Xin was not surprised that Xi Muhan and Lu Ning's new works were brought back for revision.

Can "Girls Crossing the Parallel World" be serialized?

The level is of course sufficient.

Xi Muhan has already shown a strong creative ability in "Ding Shi". Lu Ning's creative level is very different compared to before.

Therefore, there is no reason not to serialize the comics created by the two people.

The most fundamental reason why Hook is letting the two readjust the plot is that the requirements for the work are different-the magazine hopes that the new work of the two will become a new pillar, rather than a work lingering on the waist.

Xi Muhan and Lu Ning revised it again according to Hook’s proposal. Now, because Lu Ning also uses a digital display, it is quite convenient to modify it.

As for the title of the book, the two of them had been thinking for a long time, and they couldn't think of a suitable name.

After all, it is still difficult to embody the theme of the story with fewer words.

In Shen Xin's work room, assistants left one after another, while Xi Muhan and Lu Ning also discussed the progress of the comics with Wu Xiaoli. Later, Yan Fei and Wang Wenhong also participated in the discussion, and they were very happy.

After closing the pen display and the computer, Shen Xin yawned and came out of the office. After seeing five people discussing in Lu Ning's studio, he tapped on the door.

Seeing Shen Xin, Lu Ning immediately stood up, and the other four consciously gave way a little.

"What are you doing?"

"Name it. Team leader Hu Ke said, "Girls Crossing the Parallel World" is too long, it's best to compress it." Wu Xiaoli explained.

"I think the name is pretty good, and I just said the selling point." Shen Xin smiled.

Naming a book is a very important thing, as is Internet fiction, and it is best to have a selling point.For example, the system text contains "xx system". This is because when the reader searches for the popular word "system", this book may be found. Similarly, there are "XX God of War" and "XX God Emperor". The book "Rebirth of XX" is also for this reason.

However, the names of some comics are also conjecture, such as "Mix" and "H2" by Anda Chong, "Five Star Story" by Nagano, etc. If you don't read the comics, you can't guess the content of the comics, even the theme. It will be hard to think.

For "Girls Crossing the Parallel World", Shen Xin feels no big problem.

"Really? Then...Is it changed or not?" Xi Muhan hesitated.

"Looking at Wu's meaning, I'm not very good at this aspect." Shen Xin will pick it up and glance at it quickly, his brow raised slightly.

"Teacher, is there something wrong?" Lu Ning saw Shen Xin's comments on the amendment and asked quickly.

"No... I just thought it was good before. After the modification, I lost my own characteristics." Shen Xin felt a bit regretful. "The plot after the first words has some routines."

Wang Wenhong and Yan Fei looked at each other, not expressing their hearts.

They also think this way.

"Obviously, the first words are more suitable for evil Dao comics." Shen Xin added another sentence.

"However, the creation of evil Dao comics...the length will be limited." Xi Muhan tangled.

"It depends on your pursuit. If you want to create a high-profile comic, you will focus on the first words. If you want to draw a long comic, you will focus on the plot later. However, I think if you focus on thinking Draw a follow-up story...Isn’t it critical for the heroine to cross or not?"

"The plot behind is related to crossing." Xi Muhan added.

Shen Xin couldn't laugh or cry, "Perhaps, but the readers don't know the relationship between the two. Unless you want to imitate "The Gate of Destiny Stone", you can get close to each other. If you want to use crossing as a selling point, I...I am not very optimistic. "

Many times, the creator will set up a plot, and this plot has a lot to do with the follow-up, but the readers do not buy it, and feel that the plot is superfluous, which is actually the case.

Because readers don’t know the outline of the creator, they can only see what the creator wants them to see.

Take this new manga for example. From the first three words, the relationship between the first and second three words is not too big, which is the most regrettable for Shen Xin, because the first word has the potential to become a pillar , May even become another classic of evil Dao comics.

The first words of "Girls Crossing the Parallel World" remind Shen Xin of "another". The atmosphere is very close. The two can draw a decrypted comic, but the decision is in the hands of Xi Muhan, and Shen Xin doesn't really want to Stress her.

Others looked at Xi Muhan, who was lost in thought, waiting for her decision.

However, how to choose the direction of the story is not always a simple matter, and sometimes it may even make the work's performance turn from prosperity to decline.

On this day, Xi Muhan did not give a result. Until later in the next day, she brought everyone together and said her own idea-to tear down the "Girls Crossing the Parallel World".

How to disassemble?

This problem has surfaced in everyone's mind.

"It is to disassemble the first story and the following story. From the first story of the original version, a new comic is extended, focusing on adventure and decryption. The content behind is redesigned to add love, adventure, and some more myths or Monster element. But, in this way, I might have to wait another period of time to allow me to rearrange the work. As for the name of the new work, it is still called "The Girl Crossing the Parallel World."

Xi Muhan apologized to Lu Ning and Wu Xiaoli.

Shen Xin nodded, and he understood Xi Muhan's idea of ​​dividing this comic into two completely unrelated works.

In this case, Shen Xin is still looking forward to the first story. In Shen Xin's view, it does have the potential to become a pillar and even exceed other comics in ComicFuture. Of course, the premise is to exclude "".

After Hook learned Xi Muhan's decision again, he didn't say a word for a long time.

Unexpectedly, his sentence delayed the serialization date of a new work for a month.

The time entered December, and the schools that were shortlisted for the national competition were determined one by one. Fang Man also transferred the materials of major universities to Yan Fei, which was then collated by Yan Fei and handed over by Shen Xin.

At the same time, the full-color version of "" was finally determined to be produced. After the agreement between Yu Chen and Shen Xin, it was determined that the full-color version was limited to 100,000 copies and the unit price was set at 100 yuan.

The full-color version is just the icing on the cake, and "" is really sold as a regular version of the stand-alone book.

Of course, these contents are just private discussions between Yu Chen and Xin Xin. On all major platforms, Yu Chen and the magazine of "ComicFuture" just said a little bit-"The full-color version of the single book" will be available next year. Half a year.

This news is indeed great news for fans of "". Many people talked about the full-color version of the comics on the forum, and they all fought and wanted to snap up a copy.

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