My student is not a problem

Xu Mo, who forcibly wanted to change the topic, didn't think of a very good way, only to change the direction to the original manuscript created by Qiu Yuelong in the state just now.

After all, I had agreed to help her finish the new work together... When I tried to persuade her to pick up the pen again, I said something like that, I should always take it seriously.

As for the inexplicable confession... I won't mention it for the time being, although I really don't know why Qiu Yuelong is so weird, she will fall in love with herself because of her fancy to her place.

I just spent a little time picking up all the original manuscripts on the ground and rearranging them. Qiu Yuelong's manuscripts have a clear flow of each page, so even without any page numbers rearranging them, it is very easy to rearrange. Easy thing.

After sorting it out, there are a total of eight manuscripts and eight different stories.

"Student Qiu Yuelong, do you... still feel pain in your hands?" Before finishing the manuscripts, Xu Mo cared about his responsibilities as a teacher, for fear that Qiu Yuelong's hands were on the verge of collapse. I quickly brought an ice towel and let her put it on.

Qiu Yuelong is still a little stunned up to now, mainly because the feeling of the beginning of love made her a little confused. The first time she faced such feelings, she was a little rusty. Xu Mo can no longer be as relaxed in front of her as before. I don’t even dare to look at Xu Mo’s eyes, I’m shy...

"No, it won't...Thank you Xu...Teacher." Qiu Yuelong seemed to have changed back to the old lady and virtuous lady in a second, and even lowered her voice by three points.In fact, the pain in her hands has long been replaced by the excitement in her brain. Now she doesn't feel any pain. Instead, when Xu Mo intimately put an ice towel on her hands, she blushed to the limit. The kind that emits steam.

The girls in the stories she created are all bitches (meaning bitches). When she really likes people, she can't express her feelings openly like them.

Seeing that she didn't seem to react much except for her nervous look and blushing, Xu Mo also looked at the manuscript with peace of mind.

Xu Mo had already read it roughly when sorting it out, and now after sorting it out, he sorted out his mood again, and merged into the mentality of a reader to help Qiu Yuelong read the manuscript seriously. This is probably what an editor needs to do. Things, but Xu Mo seems to have done a good job.

Xu Moan read the manuscript quietly, perhaps because he was too serious, so his expression was a bit serious, and he didn't pay much attention to Qiu Yuelong's facial expressions in front of him.

In fact, Qiu Yuelong's heart is more complicated at this time. Although she is in a good state just now, she is quite satisfied with the plots of these stories, but... now it seems that when it comes to the plot of a positive film, it is completely... Not at all!

After seeing Xu Mo's thing, not only did she start to love her, but she also awakened to something strange.

The H-pictures that I used to be very satisfied with...now seem to be totally unsatisfied with her.

I have always been pursuing the so-called reality and sense of substitution. Today is really an eye-opener. I can definitely improve a lot on this. What I paint is only a corner of the feathers.

However, I also hope to get Xu Mo's approval... If he can gently praise himself after reading the manuscript... it would be great.

Xu Mo didn't know Qiu Yuelong's entangled emotions, so he quietly spent some time reading all these manuscripts.

PS: Let’s make a chapter shorter, only half of the coins will be charged, and 200 words will be given away for nothing... and it will be a chapter long later at midnight.

Chapter 527 Did you lie to me?

Xu Mo's shoulders loosened slightly, he already knew what the manuscript was like.

He also prepared to tell Qiu Yuelong what he thought.

In fact, from the perspective of a normal reader, these few manuscripts can be taken out and refined. Qiu Yuelong’s new work will definitely be sold again and continue to be adapted into various things as usual. The pseudonym of has returned to everyone's sight again.

can……

If you stand from the perspective of a normal reader, and then think about it from an assistant who wants to help her better?

There are so many things to consider.

Indeed, Qiu Yuelong’s work is great, great, deeply rooted plot and strong sense of substitution, it’s not a random sex without reason. After reading it, there’s no feeling of dullness, but want Save it for later and continue to miss it again.

can……

Seeing Xu Mo seem a bit serious, Qiu Yuelong is still very nervous. Her expression is really richer at this time. After all, she is a girl who just started her love, and she is always going through such a nervous process. She cares most now. Xu Mo couldn't tolerate anything wrong when he reacted to anything.

She took the initiative to take the manuscript that Xu Mo put down and asked as if she was self-proclaimed: "Teacher Xu, what do you think of these ideas? Especially the story of the triplets slaves. I am a little more confident... The setting is the teacher, but I think if it is set to be the principal, the coherence of the plot behind the triplets and the slave sisters will make the subsequent feature film more exciting. Hmm... and I also have the plot of the slave girl awakening and shaking the S attribute I think it's very brilliant... Which one does Teacher Xu like?"

Xu Mo's expression was a bit stiff. He didn't mean to put on airs, but he didn't think it would be better to tell her.

As a man, I would never deliberately want to pour cold water on a passionate girl, especially seeing her blushing face and eager to know the result, believing that if she tells which story she likes, she will know it 100% Use it to create new works.

Putting aside all the accidents today, there is no doubt that I am Qiu Yuelong's loyal reader all the time.

I like the 18X comics she created, because I like it, so I can't perfuse it.Because I like it, of course I hope her new work can be better.

Xu Mo took a deep breath and said sternly: "I don't think these are appropriate."

"..." Qiu Yuelong's smile just now froze in an instant, she didn't seem to expect Xu Mo to deny it so directly.

Because being denied by the person she likes is undoubtedly a very disturbing thing, so she also wanted to try her best to explain that something must be wrong.

"This... is it because of the protagonist's... Tintin problem? Yes, yes, I understand that this must be revised, and I can't stand the tintin that I drew myself at all! But when drawing these drafts I have not seen...I have seen Ding Ding who is as good as Mr. Xu, so...These pictures will be redrawn later, especially Ding Ding. I will try my best to refer to your teacher...So, in the plot... "She explained more panic, and she didn't look like her at all.

Perhaps after guessing that Qiu Yuelong would react like this, Xu Mo went on to say to her: "Yes, I mean the plot. Every one is good, but every one is not good, because I have seen it. All of your works, so I think these works are no different from your previous works. The same is based on the final feature film, with a lot of character plot polishes added. The sense of substitution is very strong and great! But many of them are like me Such loyal and old readers sometimes want to see you create something different."

"Once something has been in contact for a long time, it becomes something like a routine. Although the plot is different each time, the work is as exciting, but it seems to be like this from the beginning... I haven't seen your other styles of work, I believe it's not just me."

"Since it is a long-lost new work, if it is a brand-new style story attempt, it will definitely be an eye-opener for all those who like your work. The new things you make are also a gesture of announcing the return."

Xu Mo conscientiously talked to Qiu Yuelong about his inner thoughts, without a hint of hypocrisy.

These are Xu Mo's thoughts from the heart.

I believe that because of her special status, strong status as a big boss, and the ability to attract gold, the previous editors are also allowed to create by herself, she does not dare or want to comment or interfere with her, as long as she can attract gold. Income generation is enough.

This is probably the first time someone has completely denied her and made her make a creative change for the first time.

But in Xu Mo's view, these are all'opinions and suggestions'. If it is forced, then...

However, it seems to Qiu Yuelong...this will be more complicated.

Not to mention that such a denial of the person she likes is really a bit of a blow, and when it comes to the creation that she loves... Qiu Yuelong seems to have chosen to suppress the emotion of liking Xu Mo first.

Her face became dark and deep, and her voice trembling slightly: "...that is, do you mean to obliterate my personal style?"

"Student Qiu Yuelong, of course I didn't mean that..."

"Teacher Xu has said so much. Isn’t it that I hope I can try to write more on the story of the 18X comic book? Of course I can draw things like that. From the first stroke, it’s explicit sex. From the first page to the last page, the plot is completely unimportant, but I will not paint. Because I don’t agree that it is a work at all."

Qiu Yuelong's emotions are getting higher and higher. Fortunately, she seems to be temporarily out of the state of a girl in love, but now she looks really angry.

"I think even in 18X, you have to talk about the basic law and reason. Many things are not out of thin air. Things that come too easily are easier to discard. The so-called lust is the same, because the plot developed in this way is derived from the plot. The erotic desire, this is 18X. If you just want to see the kind of thing that turns the sky from beginning to end to see other people’s works, I don’t deny that everyone’s definition of this aspect is different, but in my eyes Love is not like this!"

"Who is it!? Where!? What are you doing!? Because of what!? So fucking!? Connecting all of these together, that is a complete work! Especially the character and character of the characters are drawn in more detail A more complete personality... Such works are works!"

"Teacher...didn't you also tell me that having the erotic look and affection is the best? Isn't that all... lied to me?" After saying this, she turned out to be angry again. The aggrieved person will cry.

PS: This is probably the second longest break in my writing career, right?The first long time was after I finished writing the second book, I stopped updating it for three years and wrote the present one, hahahahaha.

PS: I'm fine, it's Cavin. Anyway, let me scold me. I admit it, I have a good mentality.Many authors felt that the writing was broken when they got stuck, and they couldn't continue writing, so they chose the eunuch.I don't have a history of eunuchs, and I don't like to end my painstaking work like this, so I would rather be cut off for a while than choose eunuchs.Carvin is stuck, stuck, squeezed, and it's just over, there is nothing good for eunuchs.

PS: Kavin, writing new manuscripts, playing and killing chickens are all good ways to sort out.

The 528th chapter is the solution

Qiu Yuelong’s grievance was not unreasonable. It was precisely because of Xu Mo’s words that she cheered up and wanted to try again. Now Xu Mo is the person she likes again... This feeling is like being liked. People who have betrayed him, the betrayal is still the belief that he has always insisted on pursuing. This... Qiu Yuelong couldn't bear it.