My student is not a problem

All the grievances came out all at once: "If it is because of my lack of abilities, of course I have nothing to say. Then there is no way to express what I want... The large-length description of sex scenes is completely impossible. "

"If I want to cut down on character polish and heart descriptions, how can I express this personal style? Those are just momentary refreshments, watching two soulless walking corpses doing fierce transactions on the bed What's the point?"

Qiu Yuelong said all these words in one breath, and couldn't help panting... a little bit weak.

She thought about countless kinds of Xu Mo’s reactions after listening to her words, which were basically bad directions, but she never expected that after hearing her words, Xu Mo fell silent for about Ten seconds later, she came up happily and took the initiative to hug her shoulders: "Yes! That's it!"

Seeing Qiu Yuelong's reaction, Xu Mo also knew that his expression might be a little unclear when he was excited, but the excitement was real.

It turned out that he was still a little uncertain when expounding his views.

Because he simply feels that these stories are not good when viewed from a point of view that wants to help her... But how can they be changed?

Xu Mo really likes her work, so I hope that the new work will not only not lose previous readers, but also bring readers who only look at the so-called fictional works, that is, that focus on sex work, so that more people can see and like Her work, this is the purpose.

Just know that Qiu Yuelong herself said that she has her own creed, and it is impossible to really paint works that have no love and no soul, just to please those readers who like to make sex...Xu Mo is not this. Meaning, she misunderstood because Xu Mo didn't come up with a good idea.

But some words that Qiu Yuelong accidentally said when she was mad just now really inspired Xu Mo.

Xu Mo excitedly hugged Qiu Yuelong’s shoulders and explained to her: "I mean...I thought of a way to have both, Yuelong, I naturally know your beliefs, what I told you It’s true that the best work is the one with love, but...now I do have an idea, would you like to try it?"

I don’t know why, the grievance just now is still unwilling, and even a little angry, when Xu Mo is so excited, there is nothing, and it disappears in an instant... Qiu Yuelong became a little confused, and now he was full of trust in Xu Mo , No idea of ​​rejection at all.

Even if she hadn't heard what the method was, she was willing to try... and nodded subconsciously.

"This new work is directly divided into two volumes. One volume is to shape the character image of the characters in the way you like, and then to advance the plot. Moreover, this volume has to work harder in shaping the characters and polish more than before. The image is more deeply rooted in the hearts of the people, even if some positive sex content is deleted for it!"

"Huh?" Qiu Yuelong obviously did not understand why Xu Mo did this.

Xu Mo was not in a hurry, of course his words were not over yet, Qiu Yuelong would definitely understand after listening.

"When it comes to the second volume, then you can start to have fun with the feature film. Of course, you should also contact the first volume of the story."

If this is the way here, this idea is really stupid... a lot of this.

It turns out that two volumes at a time are challenging the reader's bottom line. This is obviously meaningless. If it is to try this way, what about the future?Do I need two volumes each time?

Of course Xu Mo's thoughts are more than that.

"It's only once in two volumes, and this time I don't say which is the first and which is the second. Old readers know that they have to read the story first, and also add a volume that has never been extended before. Papa, it must be big news for them, and it’s too late to be happy. Then those readers who love to write will first play the book happily, and then they will start watching the plot when they are finished. That volume is like the flashbacks often used when writing articles. The story of the two people who had sex just now. What kind of plot is it starting... Sure enough, I really want to know at this time, right? It depends on your character and plot. The ability of this kind of story will definitely attract many readers who have never been exposed to such plot works."

Qiu Yuelong listened very seriously, and she could feel that Xu Mo was seriously thinking about this for her.

No one has ever given any suggestions or opinions to herself before. As a creator, she naturally hopes that more people can see her work, and more people who agree with her beliefs, even those who only look at it. People in China can also appreciate the charm conveyed by their works.

This is also the way to prove yourself.

Didn’t you choose this path from the beginning to prove yourself?

But... Xu Mo didn't seem to be finished.

As Xu Mo saw, these were still far from enough. The key point has not been said yet. It was the inspiration given by Qiu Yuelong's grievances just now.

"The above method can only be used once, the first time the effect is definitely hot, but the behavior of two volumes at a time does not make readers buy it every time, so I asked you to be sure to be in the first volume. It is necessary to add more pen and ink to shape the main character image, what kind of character is, what kind of characteristics it has, it is best to let people remember this character once after seeing it!

"As long as you create a representative character that is deeply rooted in the hearts of the people, then there will be new works in the future. You don't need to spend time to introduce the character and settings of the character, etc., because everyone knows this character, just paint this character The new plot...it's all right! So reducing the space to introduce the characters can be used to better polish and perfect the subdivision of the sex film, and the two will not delay each other."

This is like Tomoe in Ito Junji's works.

He used the role of Fu Jiang to create many different stories, but Fu Jiang is always Fu Jiang, and everyone knows her appearance. A woman with a better face has a signature face, frivolous and unrestrained, and has a uniqueness. Her charm can make anyone, including women, fall in love with her...

Because Fu Jiang's image has been deeply rooted in the hearts of the people, everyone knows who she is.

So there is no need to introduce it again, and the new plot and different stories will not be affected.

Besides, the plot... was originally what Qiu Yuelong was good at.

In this way, whether it is belief or psychology, she can accept it, right?

PS: In the future, I will strive to update in the afternoon and evening, because the night is to be PUBG Mobile, steam: Booker Ula Snowman

Chapter 529 Feeding

On the next night, Xu Mo and Sanqian continued to have simple language exchanges in the living room, but seemed absentmindedly looking at the second floor where Qiu Yuelong was.

Almost two days have passed since he and Qiu Yuelong had a gunshot. Xu Mo did not expect Qiu Yuelong to... fall asleep after speaking.

I think that too, with such a small body, I have been working hard for so long without stopping, and my body load has already exceeded the standard.

I don’t know if she heard anything of her own. Xu Mozheng'er checked Qiu Yuelong’s state through eight scriptures, and saw that it was only because she was too tired that she fell asleep and felt relieved. He carried it to the bed in her room.

However, it might not be good to let her fall asleep like this. She will not eat or drink for a whole day. Even if she is fine now, she will change from ordinary fatigue and coma to hungry coma.

Therefore, Mr. Xu, who loves her students, does not forget to cook rice porridge that is convenient for feeding and feed her.

In this state, no matter how you call her, you can't wake up, so Xu Mo can only feed it.

As for how to feed it...Do you really think that as long as you put a spoon into the patient's mouth with a spoon, the patient will swallow it himself?Even if you are not pretending to be faint!

Quickly pick up the paper and pen, Teacher Xu will teach everyone a new posture soon.

The real feeding posture is to put the food you swallowed in your mouth first, and then stick it to the patient’s mouth. Use your hands to gently press the two sides of the patient’s mouth to make the mouth slightly open, and then The mouth of the rice porridge is slowly fed into the mouth. Under normal circumstances, the body will naturally respond and swallow automatically. If the swallowing process is not smooth, you can also use your smart tongue to stimulate the other person’s tongue. In this way... we can ensure the smooth progress of feeding.

As for Xu Mo's feeding method, this is not known.

In this way, Qiu Yuelong slept for 24 hours.

This sleep is really comfortable and comfortable, and the original exhausted body has been restored in the high-quality sleep.

And she also had a beautiful dream. In the dream, the feelings of the young girl who was in love received the best response. She became the heroine in her book, and Xu Mo was the hero in the book.

The image of this male protagonist is very obvious, handsome and humorous, and his smile is very gentle, he seems to have a wonderful attraction, and not only that, the biggest feature is his charming 36CM, which is really... …awesome.

In their dreams they were doing what couples would do, kissing...kissing...kissing...huh?Still kissing... The process of daring to kiss is a bit long... So at the end, kissing is still. Qiu Yuelong dreamed of kissing without knowing why, and did not dream of kissing at all in the subsequent scenes.

But the feeling of kissing in a dream is just as good, and it's already very satisfying, especially the feeling of kissing in this dream, it always feels like it is real.

In her dreams, she could feel the breath of the other person, the heat in the other person's mouth, and the extra foreign objects in her mouth.

...

Qiu Yuelong slept like this for 24 hours, but the first thing after she woke up was to get into her studio again.

Xu Mo thought what happened to this child, he wouldn't enter the state of dementia again, right?

Gently pushed open the door to take a look, and saw Qiu Yuelong sitting in front of the workbench in the studio. Although she was also in a state of seriousness, she was different from before. Her eyes were full of enthusiasm and motivation. The speed of holding the pen in it was so fast that Xu Mo couldn't see the path clearly.

A little relieved, she should have heard what she said before she fell asleep.