Pet boy under the snow

The indifferent expression on Xuexia’s face faded a lot, and she helped her forehead and shook her head slightly, “It’s not a question of whether you believe you or not. In fact, I thought about it carefully. It’s okay for you to participate in the lead role. Maybe it’s unexpectedly likable. ..."

When she said this, her conversation changed, "But some unreasonable points still need to be changed slightly."

When the girl said this, she picked up the manuscript next to the sofa and pointed to the line on it, "For example, don't you think it is unreasonable?"

Baizhi glanced at it, and then said quite innocently: "I don't know, this was his behavior at the time. I just wrote it out. Humans sometimes make incomprehensible behaviors. These behaviors are super Cares about rationality."

When I said this, Bai Zhi thought for a while and muttered to himself, "But you reminded me that it is true. From the eyes of ordinary people, this paragraph is indeed a bit unreasonable."

"Since it's a stage play, and you don't plan to record it in reality, it's okay to make a slight change?" It is rare for Xuexia to actively and seriously help Shirachi think about the script-the previous drafts only helped him to write some Paragraphs or typos are just drawn.

"It makes sense...Are there other questions besides this?" Shirachi agreed with Yukoshita's suggestion, and his eyes became more serious.

If possible, he certainly wants to write a perfect script.

"There is also this place..." Xuexia simply drew a pen on the table and drew a paragraph.

"right here--"

Xuexia raised his head to look at the opposite sofa, and was stunned.

The young man who was sitting across from him just now can no longer see anyone.

At this moment, a warm breath came from her shoulders, and a familiar breath came from her side. Yuukishita turned her head and saw that Shirachi’s gentle expression was close at hand, and her eyes were serious about the manuscript in her hand. .

"Xuno, what's the problem you're talking about?" It seemed that he hadn't noticed the strangeness of Xuexia, and when Shiraito spoke, it made Xuexia come back to his senses.

Xuexia quietly retracted his gaze, pretending to be indifferent, but his earlobes were slightly hot.

She took a pen and drew a thin wavy line on a short section of the manuscript.

"I think this paragraph can be changed a little bit...Of course, this is just my personal suggestion, you can refer to it."

With serious eyes, Bai Zhi nodded from time to time as he looked at the manuscript at the table, "It's been a great help, I think this paragraph can indeed be changed."

What he has to consider is not to write out the "realities he saw with his own eyes," but how to write that makes the audience feel reasonable.

"Then there is this paragraph. Before this paragraph, shouldn't it be better to add an excessive transition..."

Xuexia opened the next page and once again drew a wavy line on the manuscript, looking at the thoughtful Shiraito again, with a faint smile on his face inadvertently, "I just said, I said It’s for reference only, you can think about it later."

"No, what you said makes sense," Bai Zhi said. "If some small details are not written out, it is easy to be unclear."

Before he knew it, Bai Zhi had already developed unconditional trust in Xuexia.

Because the problems Xuexia pointed out in the manuscript just now are indeed areas that need to be revised, I believe she must be correct.

After drawing seven or eight questions on the manuscript, Xuexia turned to the last page.

"The last is here." Xuexia drew the last question.

"This kissing scene...is very unreasonable. I think it needs to be deleted, eh."

This time she did not use "suggestion" but a tone similar to commands.

Baizhi hesitated, "What is unreasonable? I learned that his beloved lover is actually his half-sister. After the brother bowed his head and kissed his sister, both parties accepted the family's request and agreed. After erasing the memory that they had loved each other, both sides turned around and walked toward the two holy places of the family."

"The story has come to an end... Isn't this a perfect ending?"

Xuexia’s eyes flickered slightly, his expression indifferent, and he pointed to the ending on the manuscript, “Not to mention that it’s not good to do this kind of thing in front of the whole school... Just considering the plot, don’t you think it’s weird? ?"

Bai Zhi blinked, staring at the last big paragraph on the manuscript carefully, "What's so strange about this?"

Yukoshita patiently said: "The two brothers and sisters who have made up their minds to separate and receive amnestics kissed each other before they finally left. Although they look beautiful, it does not mean that they still can't give up their hearts. Feelings? If that's the case, then why accept to clear the memory?"

"This is their last parting kiss. I think it's reasonable, and this is what I saw." Shirachi replied mildly.

"What you see doesn't mean it is reasonable. Don't the questions drawn in the previous section just confirm this?" Xuexia said lightly.

"Do you believe me, or do you believe what you see?"

"Then delete it." Baizhi replied simply and neatly.

Some of the plots that Xuexia said to Shirachi that need to be modified are indeed correct, and the plot of the final ending must be correct.

This is what Baizhi, a late-stage lazy cancer student thinks.

Xuexia drew a big cross on the final ending, and returned the manuscript to Baizhi.

"Okay, take it back and change it."

Chapter 136 Miss Xuexia is coming to watch the rehearsal

When it was night before Shiraichi had finished changing the script, he reviewed the script again, and after confirming that there was no problem, he turned into a cat and got into the bed under the snow, rubbed the girl’s abdomen, and found a comfortable sleeping position. Into sleep.

Early the next morning, the two took the tram to the school.

Bai Zhi handed over the perfect script to the monitor. When she took over the script, she was surrounded by many curious girls who wanted to know what kind of script Bai Zhi wrote.

In fact, some boys were also curious about taking a look at the script, but after seeing the group of girls around the script, they were discouraged.

After all, it would be too strange if a man squeezed into the pile of girls at this time, and it would be too hurt to be called a perverted hooligan or something.

Of course, if the girls don't mind, it doesn't matter even if they squeeze in.

For example, classmate Baizhi who is now surrounded by girls.

Originally, Baizhi intended to wait for them to finish reading before letting them tell her feelings, but they were forced to watch the script together as "it is more appropriate to tell you if there is any problem".

"Hahaha, is this actor too funny?" The girls who got the script discussed lively.

"I hate this heroine, she looks cold, and she is so dark-bellied, she even designed to frame the hero at the beginning."

When she saw the back, she couldn't help but said, "Tsk, the male protagonist also designed to frame the female lead? My god, how could two such black-bellied characters be the lead male and female?"

"Um...Although it is so, I think it looks quite happy." Isshiki commented.

"It's really fun, it looks like a script that makes people laugh."

"It's a very relaxing plot."

Isshiki's words aroused a lot of approval. From the current point of view, although it is a pair of male and female masters who calculate each other, because of the funny elements, the overall atmosphere is biased towards a relaxed and cheerful style.

"Student Baizhi is much better than I thought."

"Yeah, yeah, this kind of joyful script, should you say that you really deserve to be a classmate Baizhi?"

The girls continued to look down while talking.